1、精选高考英语二轮复习第三部分写作训练篇专题5短文改错第2讲句法类错误练案专题五短文改错第二讲句法类错误真题验证(2017全国) Mr.and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school，and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time，they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden，that is on the rooft
2、op of their house.They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside，they often get some useful informations from the Internet.When summer came，they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!答案：Mr.and Mrs.Zhang work in our sch
3、ool.They live far from the school，and it takes them about hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time，they are in planting vegetables in their garden， is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.，
4、they often get some useful from the Internet.When summer，they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!解析：all改为both或将all去掉。考查代词。因为主语是两个人，所以用both表示两者都，而all则表示三者或三者以上的全部。此处将all去掉也可以。解析：a改为an或one。考查冠词。因为hour的发音以元音音素开头，所以其前用an。此处也可用one表示数量“一”。解析：interesting改为interested。考查形容词。因为是描述主语they的心理状态
5、，所以使用interested“对感兴趣的”。解析：that改为which。考查关系代词。此处是非限制性定语从句，且关系代词在从句中作主语，指代上文的garden，所以用which来引导该定语从句。解析：earlier改为early。考查副词。此处没有比较的含义，所以用early的原级。解析：去掉for。考查介词。buy为及物动词，其后直接跟宾语，而buy sth. for sb.意为“为某人买某物”。解析：Beside改为Besides。考查副词。beside意为“在旁”，而besides意为“此外”。解析：informations改为information。考查名词。information
6、为不可数名词，无复数形式。解析：came改为comes。考查动词时态。因为主句部分为一般将来时态，所以此处的时间状语从句应使用一般现在时表将来意义。解析：在students后加to。考查动词的固定用法。短语invite sb.to do sth.意为“邀请某人做某事”。(2016全国)The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we st
7、ay at home，it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case，we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad，we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a goo
8、d idea.It does not cost many，yet we can still learn a lot.答案：The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about to do during the holiday.We can between staying at home and a trip.If we stay at home，it is comfortable there is no need to spend money.But in that case，we will learn littl
9、e about world.If we go on a trip abroad，we can broaden view and gain we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can/go to places of interest nearby.I that it is a good idea.It does not cost，yet we can still learn a lot.解析：how改为what。考查宾语从句。分析句子可知，are talking about后为宾语从句，且从句中do缺少宾语，故将how改为wha
10、t。解析：chose改为choose。考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后接动词原形。解析：take改为taking。考查非谓语动词。因为and连接两个并列的成分，且介词后接动名词形式，所以将take改为taking。解析：but改为and。考查连词。前后句之间为并列关系，故将but改为and。解析：在world前加the。考查冠词。根据语境可知，此处表示特指，故应用定冠词the。解析：your改为our。考查代词。因为句子的主语为“we”故此处用our。解析：knowledges改为knowledge。考查名词的数。knowledge为不可数名词，只能用单数形式。解析：删除can或将can改为sh
11、ould。考查虚拟语气。suggest意为“建议”时，其后的宾语从句要使用虚拟语气，谓语动词用should动词原形，should可以省略。解析：thought改为think。考查动词的时态。全文的时态均以一般现在时为主，故此处应用一般现在时。解析：many改为much。考查代词。表示“钱”的多少时，要用much而不是many。(2016四川) It is Mothers Day today.Though its a western festival，its popular in China now.Mom has a fulltime job，so she has to do most of
12、the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house，and then went on shopping.When he came back，I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes
13、 what I cooked were Moms favoritest.At dinner，we said to her，“Happy Mothers Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.答案：It is Mothers Day today.Though its a western festival，its popular in China now.Mom has a fulltime job， she has to do most of the.She is a great mother.Both Dad I planned to do something on
14、 Mothers Day.We up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house，and then went on shopping.When he came back，I found a bunch of flowers in hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what / I cooked were Moms.At dinner，we said to her，“Happy Mothers Day！”Mom was grate
15、ful and.解析：so改为but。母亲有一份全职工作，但是她还要做大部分的家务活。根据语境可知，前后分句间为转折关系，所以用连词but。解析：houseworks改为housework。housework为不可数名词，没有复数形式。解析：or改为and。both.and.是固定用法，故用and。解析：get改为got。本文讲述的是在母亲节发生过的事，所以用一般过去时。解析：去掉on。go shopping”购物”，是固定用法。go on doing sth.意为“继续做某事”，不符合语境。解析：her改为his。此处指父亲，所以用物主代词his。解析：kitchen前加the。此处特指”我
16、”家的厨房，故加the。解析：what改为that/which或去掉what。根据句子结构可知，此处为定语从句，先行词为The dishes，关系词在从句中作动词cooked的宾语，所以用关系代词that/which引导，关系代词在从句中作宾语时也可以省略。解析：favoritest改为favorite。favorite作名词时，意为“特别喜爱的东西”，该词作形容词时没有比较级和最高级。分析句子结构可知，此处应用名词favorite。解析：moving改为moved。母亲既感激又感动。moved修饰人，moving修饰物，根据主语为Mom可知，要用moved。(2015全国)When I wa
17、s a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown t
18、hat global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，well live to regret it.文章大意：本文主要讲述了作者呼吁人们保护我们生存的环境。答案：When I was a child，I hoped to
19、live in the city.I I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean the mountains are green.Unfortunately， the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already b
20、ecome a very problem.The we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. rare animals are dying out.We must ways to protect environment.If we fail to do so，well live to regret it.解析：thinkthought。句意：我认为在那儿很快乐。时态用法错误。这里用一般过去时，表示“过去认为”。解析：countryside前加the。句意：但是我想念农村的家乡。这里countryside是特指，故用定冠词the。解析：orand。
21、句意：那里山是绿的并且空气新鲜。连词用法错误。前后句为并列关系，故用连词and。解析：onwith。句意：随着工业化的发展。短语搭配错误。短语with the development of随着的发展。解析：been去掉。句意：许多研究表明。主语与动词为主动关系，这里不需要用被动语态。解析：seriouslyserious。句意：全球变暖已经成为一个严重的问题。词性用法错误。修饰名词，前面用形容词。解析：airsair。句意：我们呼吸的空气变得越来越脏。名词air为不可数名词。 解析：MuchMany。句意：许多罕见的动物已经消失。名词animal为可数名词，故用Many修饰。解析：foundf
22、ind。句意：我们必须找到方法来保护我们的环境。动词用法错误。情态动词must后接动词原形。解析：yourour/the。句意：我们必须找到方法来保护我们的环境。代词用法错误。这里应当是保护我们的环境。模拟强化(2017福建省厦门市二模) Last Sunday，I joined the voluntary group to help keep the traffic in good order at a big crossing near our school.At 800 am.，we arrived there，wore red vests with the word VOLUNTEER
23、 on the back.We helped with the police remind the passers-by to obey traffic rule.To our delighted，they all waited for the green light patient except one motor-biker.We also give out some hand made brochures about traffic regulations，for that many people praised us.About 4 hours later，they said good
24、-bye to the police and left.Tired as we were，we all felt an honor to do our parts.答案：Last Sunday，I joined voluntary group to help keep the traffic in good order at a big crossing near our school.At 800 am.，we arrived there， red vests with the word VOLUNTEER on the back.We helped with the police remi
25、nd the passers-by to obey traffic.To our，they all waited for the green light except one motor-biker.We also out some hand-made brochures about traffic regulations，for many people praised us.About 4 hours later， said good-bye to the police and left.Tired as we were，we all felt an honor to do our part
26、s.解析：在全文中是第一次出现，不能用特指，而应用泛指。故将the改为a。解析：现在分词作状语表主动含义，此处wear的主语是we，其间是主动关系。解析：帮助某人做某事，不存在help with sb.sth这一搭配。故将with去掉。解析：交通法规为固定用语，法规肯定不可能就一个。故将rule改为rules。解析：固定用语，意为令我们高兴的是。故将delighted改为delight。解析：副词修饰形容词，此处是用副词patiently修饰形容词waited。解析：整篇文章所描述的事情发生在过去，所以动词应用过去时态。解析：考查定语从句中介词which的用法，此处for是与后面praised
27、相照应的，praise sb.for sth.解析：全篇的人称都是we我们，根据句意也应该是“我们和警察道别”。解析：it在此处作形式宾语不可省略，真正的宾语是后面的不定式。(2017辽宁省沈阳市省示范协作校联考)One day a rich man took his son on a trip to the country in order to show his son if the poor lived，so he could be thankful to his wealth.They spent a couple of days and nights on the farm of t
28、hat would be considered a very poor family.On their return back，the father asked his son to explain what he had learnt.The boy，who had remained silent and deep in thought on the journey home，replying in a way that shocked his father.The boy said he wanted to become farmer.He envied the farmers who h
29、ad the beautiful night star to give them light while her family had only expensive lanterns.His wish was to have a farm where he could go swimming in an endless river instead of the garden pool in their home.Finally the boy finished by saying，“Before the trip I thought we were rich but today I have
30、learnt who is true rich.”With this，the boy got up and walked away，leaving his father sat on their comfortable sofa，totally speechless.文章大意：一天，一位富人为了让儿子对他的财富充满“感激”，便带着儿子来到乡村去体验农民的生活，没想到结果却令富人“无语”，因为他的儿子想当农民。答案：One day a rich man took his son on a trip to the country in order to show his sonthe poor l
31、ived，so he could be thankful his wealth.They spent a couple of days and nights on the farm ofwould be considered a very poor family.On their return back，the father asked his son to explain what he had learnt.The boy，who had remained silent and deep in thought on the journey home， in a way that shocked his father.The boy said he wanted to becomefarmer.He envied the farmers who had the beautiful nightto give them light while family had only expensive lanterns.His wish was to have a farm where he could go swimming in an endless river instead of the garden p
