1、八升九英语衔接暑期新九年级英语新初三英语第14讲 英语写作的8个闪光句型讲义含练习答案学员姓名： 学科教师：年 级：八升九 辅导科目：英语授课日期时 间主 题英语写作的8个闪光句型 学习目标1.掌握写作的八个闪光句型；2.灵活迁移所学句型到写作表达中去。教学内容1. 上次课后巩固作业复习； 2. 互动探索此环节设计时间在15分钟。教学建议：1通过两副图片同一个人因衣着不同而展现出来的不同面貌对比，旨在帮助学生理解“Fine feathers make fine birds.（人靠衣装）”这句话所表达的含义；2由谚语联想到我们的写作，我们的作文也同样需要包装，同样的意思用优美的语言表达出来会有截
2、然不同的效果。 Fine feathers make fine birds.Clothes Make the Man.So is our writing. 知识名称：英语写作的8个闪光句型 【知识梳理1】闪光句型之动词短语 1.have a great effect on (对有很大的影响)例句：抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。Smoking has a great effect on our health。 2. enables+ Object(受词)/ makes it possible for sb + to + V (使能够)例句：听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。 Listening to m
3、usic enable us to feel relaxed。旅行能丰富人们的生活。 Travelling enables our life to be enriched。【知识梳理2】闪光句型之介词短语 3.By +Ving, xx can xx (通过，能够)例句：通过做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。 By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy。通过阅读，我们可以获得更多的知识。 By reading, we can get more knowledge. 4. Thanks to/Due to/Owing to .(因为，由于) 例句：因为
4、他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。 Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream。多亏秦老师的帮助，我通过了考试。 Thanks to Miss Qins help, I passed the examination。【知识梳理3】闪光句型之句型与从句5 主语+is + the + 最高级+ 名词 +(that)+ I have ever seen (known/heard/had/read)海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。 Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen。
5、张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had。6Nothing is more important + than + to do sth.没什么比做某事更重要的事。例句：没有比保持健康更重要的事。 Nothing is more important than to keep fit。没有什么比环保更重要的事。 Nothing is more important than to protect our environment。7.The + 比较级 + S + V, the + 比较级 + S + V
6、(愈愈)例句：你愈努力，你愈进步。The harder you work, the more progress you make。我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。 The more books we read, the more learned we become。8.The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子(的原因是) 例句：我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air。【巩固练习】基础题：翻译以下句子1.没有什么
7、比与朋友分享更快乐。(nothing is 比较级 than.)2.没有什么比上寄宿学生更能锻炼人了。3.无论何时何地我们都可以利用微信同其他人联系。(.ever)4.不论结果是什么，至少你有努力过。5.不论它有多便利，我们都应该时刻警惕自己不要使用过度。6.为了美丽，很多韩国女性都去做整容手术。7.为了丰富我的暑假生活，我决定一个人去旅行。提高题：翻译以下句子8.我的建议是我们应当理性的使用它，不要让自己成为它的努力。9.这个活动不但有趣，也能扩充我们的知识面.10.是时候让自己变得独立。11.是时候让这种情况日益恶化12.我赞同举办这个活动主要有三个理由。13.重要的是这个善意的谎言鼓舞了
8、他，而不是我们失去了诚信。14.最吸引我的是节目的美食环节。15.第三，多种树，这不但可以美化城市也可以让空气清新。Keys:1. Nothing is happier than to share with friends.2. Nothing is more effective than to go a boarding school to exercise himself or herself. To exercise himself or herself, nothing is more effective than going a boarding school.3. Whenever
9、 and wherever we are, we can keep in contact/touch with others by wechat we can communicate with others by wechat.4. Whatever the result is , at least you have done your best.5. However convenient it is, we should always warn ourselves not to overuse it.6. To become beautiful/To have a pretty face,
10、many Korean women have cosmetic surgeon.7. To enrich my summer holiday, I decide/am determined to/make up my mind to travel alone.8. My advice is that we should use in a reasonable/proper way. Dont let yourself be its slave.9. Not only is this activity amusing, but also it can enlarge our knowledge
11、base/expand the breadth of our knowledge. Not only is this activity filled with fun, but also it can broaden/widen our knowledge.10. It is high time that we made ourselves more independent.11. It is high time that we stopped this situation from bad to worse/from getting worse.12. I am in favor of th
12、is activity for three main reasons:13. What matters is that the white lies cheers him up not that we lost honesty.14. What attracts me most in this program is the fine food part.15. Third, plant more trees, which can not only beautify the city but also can make air fresher.此环节教案预期时间20（练题）+15（互动讲解）分钟
13、。教学建议：1.让学生准备4分钟左右，先口头表达要点。只需要回答good or bad? Why? 即可。可以参考阅读材料中的相关表达，只要学生能灵活运用、准确迁移所学过的知识即可。2.12分钟的写作时间。写在教案空白处，要求至少写80字。老师要关注学生的写作过程，并在过程中把学生所用的好词好句及典型错误写在白板上以便写后和其他学生一起学习；3.写后让学生相互批改，找出错误表达，找出对方的亮点及不足之处；4.老师点评并给每个学生打分；5.要求学生课后把修改后的文章抄写在自己的笔记本上作为范文，下次课带过来检查。基础题Writing (作文)：(共 20 分) Write at least 60
14、 words on the topic “When I see an old person fall down in the street, I .以当我看到老人在街上摔倒，我.为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。Reference words (Use at least two of them):a traditional virtue (美德)； in favor of /against; calm; get along with; care for;(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) 学生范文一：. Whether or not to he
15、lp an old people when you see him fall down in the street has led to a great argument. As a teenager, I think I will care for him and help him in his situation because it is a traditional virtue. But knowing that some warm-hearted young people have suffered a great loss because of their behaviors. I
16、ll say someone to take some photos for my behaviors or ask someone to prove that Im really innocent. While helping others is absolutely worth praising, protecting ourselves is also important. All in all, I ll carefully and bravely give the old person a hand. 范文修改：Whether or not to help an old people
17、 when you see him fall down in the street has led to a great argument. As a teenager, I think I will care for him and help him in his situation because it is a traditional virtue. But knowing that some warm-hearted young people have suffered a great loss because of their misunderstood(加一个词进去意思表达会更明确
18、） behaviors. (，） Ill say（ask) someone to take some photos for my behaviors or ask someone to prove that Im really innocent（the helper not the trouble-maker). While helping others is absolutely worth praising, protecting ourselves is also important. All in all, I ll carefully and bravely give the old
19、 person a hand. （7.5+7+2.5=17 ）整体评析：内容完整，语意连贯。语法功底比较功底比较不错，非谓语的用法、从句的用法都很熟练。词汇量也不错，个别词汇使用不是很得当。好词好句比较多。学生范文二：Although it can often be heard that an old person fell down himself and insisted that it was innocent passer-by who helped him that caused the accident, I will help the old people who fall do
20、wn in the street without hesitation. It is a traditional virtue for teenagers to respect the old and we should keep calm if we become those innocent passers-by. We should always believe that there are only a few dishonest people and our warm hearts will be paid off. In a word, Im in favor of helping
21、 the old when they fall down in the street.范文修改：Although it can often be heard that an old person fell down himself and insisted that it was innocent passer-by who helped him that caused the accident（第一句话表达很彪悍）, I will help the old people who fall down in the street without hesitation. It is a tradi
22、tional virtue for teenagers to respect the old and we should keep calm if we become (happen to be 意思更准确)those innocent passers-by. We should always believe that there are only a few dishonest people and our warm hearts will be paid off. In a word, Im in favor of helping the old when they fall down i
23、n the street.(8+7.5+4=19.5)整体评析：这是一篇可以为满分的作为。尤其是第一句很震撼的表达，让步状语从句，宾语从句，强调句型，定语从句，被动语态一并使用到了，另有较高级的词汇insist,passer-by, innocent. 文采以下子就可以拉到一个很高的高度。作者也很聪明，将reference word: in favor of 这个不错的短语用上）文章内容完整，句意连贯。无语法错误，除了稍微更改一个become为happen to be, become 其实也没错。（2014年杨浦区一模）Haze weather in Shanghai以“上海的雾霾天”为题写一
24、篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。提示：近来人们伸手雾霾天气的困扰，学习，工作，出行等都受到了不同程度的影响。请简单描述一下雾霾天气给你带来的烦恼或不便，并谈谈你的建议和希望。The following are for reference: (以下词语仅供参考)outdoor activities,air quality, road safety, mask(口罩)Improve, cancel, allow, control, prevent写作小Tip： 本篇文章题目要求非常丰富，又要记叙给生活，出行，学习带来的不便，又要提出建议和希望，因此写作求全不必求精。语言要精练，注意连接词明
25、确，点到即可，切记恋战，写的拖沓杂乱。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 80_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _100 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _（120） Sample:Since last December, Shanghai has been in severe
26、 pollution with heavy haze,which has caused inconveniences and health threat to peoples life.First, in the morning, I have to set out 15 minutes earlier than before for the cars on the roadmove like snailswith the visibility less than 500 meters.Besides, many students have sore throat and cough .Wha
27、t depresses me most is thatour PE lesson has been canceled for 1 month and I havent touched my favorite basketball ever since.I sincerely hope the government can issue some effective policies likeencouraging green commuting and extending greenbeltsin our city and fresh air will come back soon.内容分析：雾
28、霾天气惹人忧。2014一模考有三个区考到了和空气污染有关的话题，侧重点各有不同。杨浦区要求简述雾霾天气带来的烦恼或不便，并谈谈你的建议和希望，仔细分析是需要写夹叙夹议的作文。和黄浦区谈谈雾霾天气危害的要求非常相似。但黄浦区的要求是请你就其中某一天，描述你的经历和感受”，是以记叙某一天的经历为主，而本篇的经历则可以泛泛而谈。尽管如此，两篇文章还是有很多可以相互借鉴之处，准备相同的素材，稍加转化叙事角度即可，是学习话题整合写作的好机会。全篇分三段：1综合描写雾霾天气的危害，一句话点题。2选取三个对“我”的生活影响的典型事例来写，层层递进。3一句话提出建议和希望，再次点题。 精彩亮点分析：亮点一：第一段用非限定性定从，一句话雾霾天气带来的危害，言简意赅，且用完成时时态可以更好强调对现在依然有影响。亮点二：车开得象蜗牛一样慢，形象的比喻。亮点三：with介词短语做伴随状语，简明道出车开得慢的原因。Visibility能见度。亮点四：Wha
