1、高分作文常用连接词高分作文常用连接词1 表层次First, firstly, to begin with, in the first place, second, secondly, to start with, still, furthermore, third, thirdly, whats more, last but not least, also, and then, next besides, and equally important too, moreover, besides, in addition, finally2 表转折Although, though, yet, a
2、t the same time, but, despite the fact that, even so, in contrast nevertheless even though on the other hand otherwise instead still regardless3 表因果Therefore consequently because of, for this reason, thus, hence, due to, owing to, so, accordingly, thanks to, on this account, since, as, on that accou
3、nt, in this way, for4 表递进Furthermore, moreover, likewise, what is more, besides, also, not onlybut also5 表举例For example, for instance, for one thing that is to illustrate6 表解释As a matter of fact, frankly speaking, in this case, namely, in other word7 表总结In summary, in a word, thus, as has been said,
4、 in brief, in conclusion, in other words, to conclude, finally, in simpler terms, in short, on the whole, to put it simply, in all, therefore, to summarize.8 表强调Of course, indeed, surely, as a matter of fact, above all, most important, in particular, that is to say, certainly, in fact, anyway, in th
5、is case, naturally, obviously, no doubt, actually, clearly9 表比较In comparison, likewise, however, similarly, equally, in the same way, unlike10 表时间After a while, afterward, and then, presently, at last, simultaneously, at length, at that time ,since, so far, eventually, finally, subsequently, then, f
6、urther, thereafter, in the first place, in the past, until now, meanwhile lately.图表作文1 图表类型表格 TABLE (每个后面都是配有原图的这个可以在WORD文档中做出这些图表来的,请注意每一个都要添置图样这样利于你的PPT教学)柱状图 BAR CHART 饼状图 PIE CHART坐标曲线图 GRAPH2 图表作文的写作步骤:根据图表的要求一般可以分三段来写第一段大体描述出图表反映的总的情况第二段是对数据进行比较和分析,并做出归纳,找出变化的原因和结果最后一段是写出自己的结论和建议3 例文Average nu
7、mber of hours of a student spends on the computer per weeka. 图所示为1990年1995年2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况,请描述变化b. 请说明发生这些变化的原因(可以从计算机的用途、价格、或社会发展等方面加以说明)c. 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。图略As the bar chart shows, the average number of a student in a certain university spent on the computer per week increased dramatica
8、lly during the years of 1990 to 2000. as early as 1990, a student only spent one hour on average on the computer each week. Then five years later, the number increased four times. Finally in the year 2000, an average student was sitting in front of the computer screen for as many as twenty hours eve
9、ry week. Several factors contribute to the sharp increase in the amount of time employed in computer use. First, the computer has variety of applications nowadays. Also, with the development of society, computer skills have become a must for employment. Finally, the gradually lowered price of comput
10、ers makes it possible for the computer to find its way to the common home. All this results in the boom of computer use. However, the computer may also cause some problems. The computer, in my opinion, may be addictive, the effect of which is not only physical, but also mental, turning the student i
11、nhuman as well as weak. So my principle is to use the computer, but do not overdo it.4 图表作文常用词组和句型a. 文章开头According to the table/ chart/ graph/ figures we can see thatAs is shown in the table/ chart/ graph/ figures thatAs can be seen from The table/ chart/ graph/ figures shows thatIt can be seen from
12、 We can see from the table/ chart/ graph/ figures thatIt is clear from It is obvious fromb. 数据的描述上升: increase, rise, go up, grow, boom, be on the rise/ increase下降: decrease, drop, fall, go down,稳定: remain steady/ stable from to There is little/hardly any/ no change in the number of (cars sold) from
13、to/ between and达到最高点: (the monthly profit) peaked in (December) / reached a high point降到最低点: (the figures) reached the bottom/ a low pointc. 表变化速度和程度的形容词和副词Slow, slight, gradual, steady, quick, fast, rapid, significant, vast, dramatic, sharpThe number of increased dramatically/rose gradually/fell sh
14、arply from June to December.There was a rapid/ significant/slight increase/drop in the number of fromto5. 例文2Study the following table carefully and base your composition on the informationgiven in the table.a. state the changes in peoples diet in the past five years;b. give possible reasons for the
15、 changes.c. Draw your own conclusions图略 也是一个表格Changes in Peoples DietAs can be seen from the table, great changes took place in peoples diet from 1986 to 1990. the composition of grain, fruit and vegetables decreased year by year while that of some high-energy food, such as milk and meat, increased
16、steadily.Why were there changed in peoples diet? There were two major reasons. First, people could afford to buy more expensive food with better nutrition because of the improvement of their living standards. Second, people paid more attention to the quality of their diet, because they knew it was o
17、f great benefit their health to eat in a scientific way. Therefore, they were trying their best to improve the structure of their food.From the above, we can see that peoples living standard improved greatly in the five years between 1986 and 1990 since our country had been opened to investment, tra
18、de technical and economic cooperation with other countries on the basis of equality and mutual benefit. We can also expect that their life is sure to be more prosperous in the years to come.6. 例文 3Directions : study the graph below and write a composition of about 120 words on “Fire Causes in London
19、 in the year 2002”. Your composition should be based on the information given in the graph.Your composition should be in 3 paragraphs:a. The first paragraph introduces the causesb. The second paragraph reports the information given the chartc. The third paragraph concludes the composition by giving
20、some suggestions此为一个饼状图 略Fire Causes in London in the year 2002Fire is one of the most terrible killers in London, as in other cities of the world. As can be seen from the chart above, careless smokers, defective insulations and children playing with matches are the three major causes of fires in th
21、at city.In the year 2002, many fire accidents took place in London. Smokers were the biggest cause of all, which accounted for 50% of the fires. Another major factor was children playing with matches. They were responsible for 37.5% of the fire incidents. Another 12.5% of the fires resulted from def
22、ective insulation.From the chart, we can conclude no matter what the type of fire was, careless seems to be the root cause. Therefore, smokers should be advised to be more careful with the cigarette ends. Besides, we need to keep a closer eye on our children and warn them of the dangers of playing w
23、ith matches. Workers should also be instructed to take a good care of insulation.提纲式作文提纲式作文是历年四、六级考试中最常见的题型。它要求考生根据给出的题目和提纲,确定文章的中心思想,然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开论述,表达提纲的主旨。它的优点是提纲既体现了文章的层次, 又规定了各段大体的内容,为考生提供了一条思路,稍加思考、计划、整理就可成文。但缺点它的限定性较大,不理解提放所展现的内容或词汇,就会感到难以下笔。一、 写作步骤和技巧:1 写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,认清题目和提纲之间的关系,然后
24、确定文章的主题、内容以及问题。即对文章总体的把握2 每一个提纲可以作为文章的一个段落层次(全文3-5段为佳),关键是将给定的提纲转化为主题句。如果提纲知识对一文章的提示和概括,不是主题句,这学要根据提纲的性质写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子,使之成为主题句3 然后围绕主题句进行扩展,运用材料支持主题句。材料可以是事实、例证、亲身经历、名人名言、谚语警句等。应当注意的是,所选材料要与文章的主题相符,能充分说明问题。在有多个例证的段落中, 还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。二、 审题和构思My View on Job-hoppinga. 有些人始终喜欢从事一种工作,因为b. 有些人喜欢经常换工作,因为c
25、. 我的看法显而易见,这是一道提纲式的作文题。可以通过以下审题和构思过程完成这篇作文:1 分析题目和提纲可知,要写出“不换工作“的原因,然后给出自己的看法,重点是原因和看法。2 根据提纲,文章可分三段,第一段是“喜欢做一种工作的“的原因;第二段写出”喜欢经常换工作“的原因;第三段”我的“看法。根据以上分析,可以把提纲转换为主题句如下:some people tend to stick to their position all the timesome people are different. They are in the habit of job-hopping.as far as I
26、am concerned, I am not in favor of constant job-hopping.3 以材料支持各段主题句。第一段的材料可以是:喜欢那份工作的各种原因: 有发展前途、工资高等;第二段经常“跳槽”的原因:不能施展自己的才能,谋求更高的收入等;第三段也要说明原因,并总结归纳,圆满结尾。三、 参考范文:My View on Job-hoppingSome people tend to stick to their positions all the time, as they think the longer one works in a particular fiel
27、d, the more skillful one will be at it. Some have been teachers all their lives. Some devote all their energy to scientific research. Such people love their work and turn out to be specialists in their own fields. They are usually high achievers.Some are different. They are in the habit of job-hoppi
28、ng, for they always go after what is new and stimulating. They never seem content with their present situations. They like to meet more people, make more money and new acquaintances, so they hop from job to job.As far as I am concerned, I am not in favor of constant job-hopping. I believe in a famou
29、s proverb, “A rolling stone gathers no moss.” I want to be professionally strong. And I respect those who devote themselves to their affectionate jobs throughout their life.四、 四六级写作中常见的写作模式1 对立观点式 (92/01, 92/12,95/01,96/01,98/06,99/06,2000/06 )A 有人认为X是好事,为什么?B 有人认为X是坏事,为什么?C 我的看法模式1Some people belie
30、ve (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1 because But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.More importantly, 论据2.Most important of all, 论据3.In summary,Or From above,
31、 we can predict that 模式2People hold different views about X. some people are of the opinion that 观点,while others points out that 观点. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, 论据1.For another, 论据2.Last but not least, 论据3.To conclude, 总结观点。Or From above, we c
32、an predict that预测.2 批驳式观点A. 一个错观点。B. 我不同意。Many people argue that错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。There might be some element of truth in these peoples belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 正确的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照上文的写法)。3 社会问题现象式( 93/01)A. 一个社会问题或现象及产生的原因B. 对社会和我们的生活的影响C.