1、高考英语写作专题专题二十书面表达考点一提纲类Writing 1(2010湖南)假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部,开展了为期两个月的活动。现在,你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流,请写一篇英语发言稿,主要内容如下:1.简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动;2.谈谈你们开展该活动的收获。注意:1.词数不少于120个;2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。答案写作提示1.应该用第一人称的形式来写发言稿,同时注意以面对别人介绍俱乐部情况的口吻行文。2.时态方面:从试题的内容上可以看出应用一般过去时、一般现在时或现在完成时。3.内容上:首先,简要介绍自己参与组织的英语俱乐部的基本信息。其次,介绍组
2、织过的和英语相关的一项重要活动。最后,阐述成功组织此次活动之后的收获。One possible version:Boys and girls,Our English Club has held a variety of activities in the past two months,which has drawn much attention of the students and teachers.Recently our club held an English speech contest,the theme of which is“Challenge Myself and Stre
3、ngthen Self-confidence”.A large number of students attended the contest and showed their wonderful performances and a great many teachers and students crowded into the hall to see their performances.At the stage,no matter what pressure the speakers faced,they bravely overcame it and challenged thems
4、elves to achieve great success.Whats more,they impressed us,the host,deeply with their unusual confidence and performances.Through such an activity,we know a lot more about our students and our school.And we have gained much,such as self-confidence,honor,and so on.Besides,our club is growing stronge
5、r and more mature.Thats all.Thank you.Writing 2(2010山东)假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游,但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件:1.表示歉意;2.解释原因;3.另约时间。注意:1.词数120150;2.可适当增加细节。答案写作提示1.人称方面:应该用第一人称的形式给Tom(用第二人称)写封书信。2.时态方面:从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点1、2、3时大部分内容应用一般现在时和一般将来时,部分细节根据实际情况可选用其他合适的时态。写作时需要注意个别句子间时态的灵活转换。3.格
6、式和语言:书信常用的标准格式要正确,语言要简练、地道。4.内容:首先,因故不能赴约要对Tom表示歉意;其次,向Tom详细解释原因;最后,与Tom约定新的时间。One possible version:Dear Tom,Im sorry,for I wont be able to pay a visit to Beijing next weekend with you.Because there are many friends of mine facing a coming English exam,which is without doubt important for them.They
7、are looking forward to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successfully.As a result,I will be busy helping them at that time.In addition,I will attend a party which aims to raise money for the people of Yushu,who suffered greatly from the big earthquake.In a nutshell,Im af
8、raid Ill have no time to accompany you.So I want to put off our visit until the first weekend of next month.Is it OK?Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li HuaWriting 3(2010浙江)最近,李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹(在上周六下午,不顾天气炎热,为班级选购歌咏比赛服装),用英语为班级板报写一篇100120个词的短文。你的文章应包括下列要点:1.李越的事迹及其对同学的影响;2.你的评论。注意:1.
9、文章的标题和开头已给出(不计词数)。2.参考词汇:singing contest歌咏比赛costume服装Star Student of the WeekLi Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week”for what she did for our class.答案写作提示1.本文应为使用第一、三人称的记叙文,描述李越的事迹时用一般过去时,其余使用一般现在时。2.第一段提出主题,李越被评为“每周之星”;描述其事迹时注意时间、地点、人物细节描写的添加,最好使用现在分词、过去分词等增添文采;注意时态、语态的转换;描写事
10、件时注意使用时间状语和副词进行衔接。3.第二段写出自己的评论,注意使用总结描述性形容词,适当使用短语,如devote to,set a good example to等和副词,如besides,therefore等。One possible version:Star Student of the WeekLi Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week”for what she did for our class.On the hot afternoon of last Saturday,Li Yue went dow
11、ntown and walked from one store to another,looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest.While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms,she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting.Finally,she found the right clothes.Deeply moved by her eff
12、orts,we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class.Besides,she often devotes her spare time to helping others.She has set a good example to us.Therefore,she deserves the honor and we should learn from her.Writing 4(2010课标全国)假设你
13、是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest),希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。英语演讲比赛主题:人与自然时间:6月15日下午2:005:00地点:501教室参赛选手:10名学生联系人:李华(电话44876655)欢迎大家光临注意:词数100左右。Dear Ms.Smith,With best wishes,Li Hua答案写作提示1.自我介绍;2.邀请Smith女士做评委;3.演讲比赛通知的具体内容:(1)演讲主题;(2)比赛时间;(3)比赛地点;(4)参赛选手;(5)联系方式。One possible v
14、ersion:Dear Ms.Smith,Im Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School,which is close to your university.Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in Room 501 in our school on June 15.It will start at 2:00 p.m.and last for about three hours.Ten stud
15、ents will deliver their speeches on the given topic“Man and Nature”.We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes,Li HuaWriting 5(2011江西)假设你是星光中学的李华,将参加主题为“Lets Ride Bic
16、ycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿,主要内容包括:1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题;2.骑自行车的益处,如节能环保、有利健康等。参考词汇:低碳生活(low-carbon life);节能(energy-saving)注意:1.词数:120词左右;2.演讲稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Good morning,everyone,I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles”.Thank you!答案写作提示1.本文要求写一篇有对比意义的文章,同时
17、是一个演讲稿,所以通常用第一人称。2.建议采用三段式:一段写利用汽车出行的缺点;一段写利用自行车出行的好处;最后一段可以发出号召。3.写作要点:空气污染、交通阻塞、节能环保、有利健康等。4.参考词汇:with the improvement of sth.;low-carbon city;whats more。One possible version:Good morning,everyone,I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is“Lets Ride Bicycles”.As is known to
18、 all,with the improvement of peoples living standards,cars have become a popular means of transport,bringing great convenience to our life.However,they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.How can we solve these problems then?As far as Im concerned,riding bicycles is
19、 a good solution.For one thing,bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energy-saving.For another,bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas.Whats more,riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.Therefore,lets take the respon
20、sibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles.Come on and join us!Thank you!Writing 6(2011辽宁)假定你是李华,将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B&B 公司要招聘一名英文秘书,你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信,包括下列要点:1.年龄;2.学习情况及英语水平;3.兴趣和特长;4.性格特点。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。June 8Dear Sir/Madam,I learned from the newspap
21、er that your company needs an English secretary.Im looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours,Li Hua答案写作提示1.本文属于应用文,以李华的名义写一封求职信,应使用第一人称,基本时态为一般现在时;2.内容要点:介绍年龄情况;介绍学习情况及英语水平;介绍自己的兴趣和特长;介绍自己的性格特点。One possible version:June 8Dear Sir/Madam,I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an Engl
22、ish secretary.Im really interested in this position and hope I can work for you.Im 18 years old and will be graduating from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this July.Im an excellent student,among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.Im good at English,especially spoken English.I often use the compu
23、ter and I type very fast.In my spare time,I read a lot.Poems are my favorite.I enjoy music very much too.Being an active young person,I like sports and outdoor activities.Besides,Im easy to get along with and I like to make friends.Im looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours,Li HuaWriting 7(201
24、1全国)假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:1.说明你是该报的忠实读者2.赞赏该报优点: 1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事3.提出建议: 刊登指导英语学习的文章注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!Sincerely yours,Li Hua答案写作提示1.本文属于书信体文章。重点介绍Global Mir
25、ror周报的优点。建议使用第一人称,时态以一般现在时为主。2.内容要点:说明自己的身份:该报的忠实读者;介绍该报的优点;对该报提出改进建议。One possible version:Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!Im a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.First,it covers both national and int
26、ernational news so that,by simply turning the pages,I can learn all important things that have happened during the week.Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people,which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.As a young student,I suggest
27、that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning,and I hope that it will become even more popular.Sincerely yours,Li HuaWriting 8(2011陕西)假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。Im the mother of a fourteen-year-old.I have a rule for my daughter:be among
28、the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another.She has been doing very well in school,but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her.Am I wrong?写作要点:1.表明自己的看法;2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明);3.提出至少两条建议。要求:1.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。2.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。3.书写须清晰、工整。Hi,TigerMom,What pu
29、zzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is答案写作提示1.本文为议论文,基本时态为一般现在时,文中表达的观点和提出的建议要合理,论据要充分。2.内容要点:表明自己的观点,对此做法给出判断;举例证明成绩重要但不代表一切,且惩罚不是解决问题的方法;提出自己的建议。3.参考词汇:evaluate v.评估,评价;turn out to be结果是,证明是;as.as.和一样;by no means一点也不。One possible version:Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is
30、 actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored.There are m
31、any examples around us.Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected.The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends advice.More importantly,let her live like a lovely g
