1、广东省高考英语一轮 短文改错书面表达训练6广东省2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（6）附参考范文短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to
2、 our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctors advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children disli
3、ke fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.【答案】I like eating fruit and vegetables what （改为which/that）
4、are of great benefit to our healthy（改为health）. Not only do they prevent us from falling into（去掉into） ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow（改为following） the doctors advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going（改为goes）, “ An apple a day keeps
5、 the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike（改为disliking或在dislike前加who） fruit and vegetables. On（加the） contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were（改为are） crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong（改为 str
6、onger）. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.（改为 it）*结束I. 表格提示类1. 下表是对某中学高三一班50个学生健康问题的调查表。请根据表格内容，综述学生当前存在的健康问题，并就中学生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建议。词数要求: 120左右。问题类型学习焦虑逆反心理缺乏交往睡眠不足缺乏锻炼视力不佳人数352015402535比例704030805070As is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems
7、both physically and mentally, with 70% of students having learning anxieties as well as bad eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep. Coming next is the lack of physical exercise. 40% of the students surveyed wont obey their parents or teachers. Still fewer claimed not to have enough communic
8、ation with others.So far as 1 am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies. Just like a saying goes: All work but no play makes Jack a dull boy, without a sound body one cannot achieve anything; However, too much attention has been paid only to studies. Therefore, I sug
9、gest we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems. Only in this way can we lead a healthy life.*结束短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分） 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划一个（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）；则按下列情况改正： 此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一词：在缺
10、词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。 This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 66. the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 67. FestivalMy grandma was the best cooker in the world 68. but could make the most delicious dishesOne time, I
11、just 69. couldnt wait for the Spring Festival dinnerAs I was 70. about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 71. the kitchen looking at meShake her head, she said, It 72. isnt a good time to do that, dear At once I apologize 73. and controlled me at my best till the dinner startedYou 74.
12、 know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month 75. 参考答案66.boy前加a 67.去掉when 68.cooker改为cook 69.but改为and 70. 71.about后加to 72.Shake改为Shaking 73.apologize改为apologized 74.me改为myself 75.month改为months*结束(3)(25 min.)假如你是张华，你的一个笔友Alice将要来你市参观游玩。本来你答应要去机场接她的，但是由于某些原因，你不能按时去接机。为此，你给她发一封email，内容包括：1.
13、向她道歉，说明原因(自己设想)；2. 提出解决办法(叫她在旅客休息室等你)；3. 你们是第一次见面，告诉她如何认出你来(自己设想)。注意：词数不少于120。参考词汇：旅客休息室arrival lounge_参考范文One possible version：Dear Alice, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport on time.The reason is that your flight will arrive at 9 oclock on the morning of May 9
14、, and unluckily our teacher has decided to give us an English test at that time. So the earliest time when I can reach the airport will be about an hour after you land. Will you please wait for me in the arrival lounge? You can have a rest while you wait.By the way, as we have never met before, I mu
15、st tell you that I will wear a white Tshirt, two red balloons in hand that day so that you can recognize me easily.Hope we can meet soon.Sincerely yours, Zhang Hua*结束表格提示类10请你根据列表格内容，写一篇短文，比较newspaper与website的异同，并谈谈你的看法。相同点不同点1向读者提供信息1报纸一经出版不能改变，而网站可以不断更新内容。2通过刊登广告赚钱2报纸要花钱，而在网上可以免费浏览信息。3可以容易地在网站上发表自
16、己的看法。我的看法 注意：1、短文必须包括表内所有的内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯； 2、首句已给出，不列入总词数； 2、词数：120词左右。One possible version:Newspapers have been popular for a long time, but in recent years more and more people prefer to get news from the Internet. Newspapers and websites are similar in several ways. For example, they both aim a
17、t providing information to the public. Besides that, advertising is an important way for both of them to make money.In spite of the above similarities, there are a few differences. Websites update their news freely. As for newspapers, nothing can be changed once published. So websites offer us the l
18、atest news faster than newspapers. Furthermore, newspapers have to be paid for while most websites are free. And it is on the websites that we can express ourselves and exchange ideas with others more easily.In my opinion, websites and newspaper play their own roles in our lives and they are part of
19、 our lives.*结束表格提示类11. 假如你是一名高三学生，经常为看电视的事跟妈妈闹意见，今天你和妈妈达成一致。请根据以下表格的内容，以An Agreement为题写一篇120字左右的英语短文。母亲儿子高三学生学习任务重，看电视浪费时间学习一天很疲劳，看电视可以放松一下儿子自制力差，看电视会影响学习，长期看电视会影响视力看电视也可以增长知识，了解国际国内大事，紧跟时代星期中不准我看电视，但在周末允许我看新闻、文艺、体育或科普类节目 注意：1字数100120，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；2不要漏掉表格中的内容，但不能逐字翻译；3可适当增添合乎情理的过渡性语言。I am a senio
20、r three student. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother holds the view that students in senior three, shouldering heavy loads, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV. It seems to her that once I am allowed to do that Ill not be able to control myself a
21、nd forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often. But I really cant accept her ideas. I think it is a relaxation to watch TV after a days hard work. Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons. Now weve at last reached an agreemen
22、t that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news, programs ,entertainment, sports and science.*结束高考英语作文精选范文-纯文字信息提示类纯文字信息提示类1. 目前家长为孩子请家教是一种普遍现象。前几年多见于初、高中学生，现在有些小学生也请家教。父母们如此舍得花钱和忍心占去孩子的时间，究竟是为什么呢？某中学生英语报正在征文，了解其中原因。请根据下面所给的标题和首段内容，分析慢、中、快三类学生请家教的原因并说明你对家教现象的态度。注意：
23、词数100词左右。参考词汇：1慢等生：catch up with sb. ; become dependent on sth.依赖2中等生：surpass vt.超过 3快等生：more competitive 更有竞争力的Why Students Have Tutors（家教）？Less take one class, either in primary or high school, as an example and divide it into three groups: the slow, the middle, and the fast learners. In the past,
24、 the slow learners used to have tutors. Today, however, it seems all of them have tutors for one reason or another.The slow learners need tutors because they cant catch up with others with their own efforts. They have difficulty in understanding the teachers and doing their homework. So after class
25、tutoring is really important to them. But the problem is that they may become dependent on tutors and not work very hard in class.As to the middle group learners, they worry about being surpassed and turn to tutors, too.What about the fast learners? Though they are confident about their present position, they are not quite sati
