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写作课时1
英语写作
一审”即审题。
主要是看清楚题目要求,读懂题目所表达的含义,抓住要点,注意文体是什么,
1看写什么(人或事)
2看其要求内容(题目中以给出的大纲类的必写内容,单词、词组和句式)
3看合适的时态。
准备写作的人称和时态:
如果是日记和故事,宜采用过去时态;如是简介之类的,宜采用现在时态。
“二写”即列纲。
主要是列个提纲,考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型,要能根据自己的英语水平,尽量扬长避短,避难就易。
遇到想不起的词、句时,就用同(近)义词或同义句代替,不要使用没有把握的词句,并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合,语言要地道。
“三连”即连句成文。
根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么,后写什么,按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要,重新排列组合已写成的句子,划分必要的段落,一般分成三段。
但要注意句式的灵活运用,长、短句,简单句,复合句要搭配运用。
“四改”即修改润色全文。
主要是看全文符不符合题目要求,行文是否流畅,有没有遗漏要点;语法是不是正确,包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。
*总之做到
三审:
体裁、时态、人称;
三思:
词汇—>短语—>句式;
三查:
要点、拼写和语法、连贯
文章分3段:
(1)综述:
概括性强,最多2句话引入主题;
(2)正文——主要内容:
层次性强,一定要有过渡型连接词。
最多展开3个方面,每个方面最多2句话;
(3)结尾:
紧扣主题,2句话内结束,尽量升华。
一.开头用语:
A.Justaseverycoinhastwosides,carshavebothadvantagesanddisadvantages.
B.Comparedtoletters,e-mailsaremoreconvenient.
C.Opinionsaredividedontheadvantagesanddisadvantagesoflivinginthecityandinthe
countryside.
D.Asweallknow,computershaveplayedanimportantrole/partinourdailylife.
E.Whydoyougotouniversity?
Differentpeoplehavedifferentpointsofview.
F.Withthedevelopmentofinternet…moreandmorepopular…
G.Asastudent
K.asanoldsayinggoes….
句式:
1.too...to...
Heisveryyoung.hecan’tgotoschool.
Heistooyoungtogotoschool.
2.so...that...
Heisveryclever.Hecanworkouttheproblem.
Heissocleverthathecanworkitouttheproblem.
Heiscleverenoughtoworkouttheproblem.
3.notonly...butalso...
4.Ithasmanyadvantages.First,优点1…Besides,优点2…
5.However,everycoinhastwosides.Italsobringsusbadinfluences.
Ontheonehand,缺点1…Ontheotherhand,缺点2…
Shenotonlyplayswell,butalsowritesmusic.
她不仅很会演奏,而且还会作曲。
Notonlythestudentsbutalsotheirteacherisenjoyingthefilm.
不仅学生们在欣赏这部影片,他们的老师也在欣赏这部影片。
4.Itisimportant(easy,hard,possible,good,bad…)forsb.Todosth.
还有rather…than…not…until…aswellas…慢慢的补充
连词:
1)表层次:
first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,
tobeginwith,tostartwith,
whatismore,last,also,andthen,next,besides
Atfirst;atlast;intheend…
then/next/afterthat…
when/while/assoonas/not…until…
inaddition
finally
Ononehand....ontheotherhand,
each/onecoinhastwosides,
2)表转折;but,
however,
though,
although,afterall,
inspiteof,
fortunately,
unfortunately,
atthesametime…
3)表递近:
inaddition,
besides,
moreover,
what`smore
4)因果
because,so,
becauseof,
thanksto,
dueto,
for,
since,
owingto,
asaresult(of),
hence,
thus
5)例证forexample,forinstance,suchas
6)表示利弊的:
begood/badforsb;
beharmfultosb;
doharmtosb;
…havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb;
sthbenefitsb;
sbbenefitfromsth;
affect;haveaneffectonsb;
表示喜爱的:
love/like/enjoy…;
befondof…;
beinterestedin…;
showgreatinterestin…;
loseoneselfin…;
putone’sheartinto…;
7)总结
AsIsee,Asforme,
Asweallknow,
ingeneral,
generallyspeaking,
Ithink...,infact,
inaword,
inbrief,
inconclusion,
inshort,
insummary,
tosumup,
十、作文万能句式
Iwillworkhardtomakemydreamcometrue.
Ihopeyourdreamwillcometrueoneday.
Ittakessb.+时间+todo…
Sb.spend(某种人称时态)+时间/钱+onsth./(in)doingsth.
It’simportant/necessary/useful/useless/common…(forsb)tov…
It’snice/kindofsbtov..
It’stimeforsbtodosth
It’sawasteoftimeto…
It’s…years/dayssincesb+ved
It’sgreatfuntodo=sbhavegreatfundoing
It’sapitythat…
It’sanhonorto…
I’m/We’renotallowedto…
I’mafraidofmakingmistakes…
Therebe…doing…
Greatchangeshavetakenplacein…
sthis/arewellworthv-ing.
Itseems/seemedthat…
Itseems(im)possibletov…
Itissaidthat…
…and….aredifferentinmanyways.
too+adj./adv.todo
Therearemanydifferencesbetween…and…
话题练习:
沉迷网络游戏
题目:
李华沉迷于电脑游戏中,影响了学习。
作为他的好朋友,你打算怎么帮他呢?
请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。
字迹工整,语言流畅。
提示词:
give up/ concentrate on /be (become)interested in
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Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him\
Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.
2013山东青岛中考英语作文题目及范文
同学们,三年的初中生活就要结朿了,在我们的成长过段中,既有快乐,也有烦恼。
请用英文写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.你在学校或家里曾经遇到的最大问题或烦恼;
2.你解决问题或烦恼的过程;
3.你的感想。
要求:
1.字数:
80—100字。
开头已给出,不计入总字数。
2.文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。
Mymiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.Duringthethreeyears,notonlydidIhavehappytime,butIhadkindsofproblems.Mybiggestproblemwas
范文
Mymiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.Duringthethreeyears,notonlydidIhavehappytime,butIhadkindsofproblems.MybiggestproblemwasthatIusedtobeshy.SometimesIreallydidn’tknowwhomIshouldaskforhelpwhenIwasintrouble.
First,Ilearnedhowtocommunicatewithothersandmakeasmanyfriendsaspossible.ThenwhenIwasintrouble,Iaskedmyclassmatesorfriendsforhelpbecausewewerethesameageandwecouldunderstandeachothereasily.Besides,Ialsotoldmyteachersorparentsaboutmytroubleandaskedfortheirhelp.Theywerefullofloveandhadrichexperience.
Now,Iammoreoutgoingthanbefore.Icangetalongwellwithpeoplearoundme.
2014年青岛中考英语作文题大概要求如下:
有很多学生早上不吃早餐。
写80~100词的短文,要包含下面的要点。
1.你认为他们为什么不吃早餐?
2.这样会有什么影响?
(至少2条)
3.你认为如何合理安排早餐?
范文1
Somestudentswhostayuplatetostudyrefusetoeatbreakfastinordertohaveanotherfewminutesinbedinthemorning.
AsfarasIamconcerned,goingtoschoolwithoutbreakfastisharmfultoourhealthtoourhealth.Ontheonehand,ourbodiescan’ttakeinenoughenergy,whichmayreducetheefficiencyofstudybecausewecan’tfocusinwhatteacherssay.Ontheotherhand,itiseasyforustopickupkindsofdiseasesincludingstomachache.
Trytodevelopingagoodeatinghabit.Gotobedearly,getupearly,whichnotonlybenefitsourhealthbutalsocanhelpushaveagoodperformanceatdailystudy.
范文2
Breakfastisthemostimportantmealofthethree.Butnotallthestudentshaverealizedhowimportantitis.
Somestudentssaythatreasonwhytheydoesn’thavebreakfastisthattheydon’tenoughtimebeforetheygotheschool.Becauseofthepressureoftheirstudy,theyhavetostudyverylate.Anditisveryhardforthemtogetupsoearly.Sotheywouldn’trathercutthebreakfasttimetosleeplonger.
Inmyopinion,healthyeatinghabitsareveryimportantforourhealth.Ifwedon’thavebreakfastforalongtime,itwillcausealotofproblems.Ontheonehand,ourbodywon’tgetenoughnutrition.Thiswillstopusfromgrowinguphealthy.Ontheotherhand,asastudent,ifwedon’teatbreakfast,wecan’tconcentrateonourstudy.Thiswillleadustogetbadgrades.
Howtoeatahealthybreakfast?
AsfarasIamconcerned,therearethreemainways.Firstly,weshouldeatmorefreshvegetablesandfruitsbutlessmeateveryday.Secondly,wehadbetterdrinkaglassofmilkinthemorning.
2015年中考作文:
现在,很多中学生被近视困扰,请就此现象写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。
内容包括:
1.造成近视的原因;
2.近视对学习或生活的影响;
3.你认为应该如何保护视力?
(至少两条建议)
要求:
1.字数80-100字。
开头已给出,不计入总字数。
2.文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。
参考词汇:
eyesightn.视力nearsightedadj.近视的
havegoodeyesight视力好havebadeyesight视力差
Quitealotofstudentshavebecomenearsightednow
范文1
Quitealotofstudentshavebecomenearsightednow.Ithinkthemainreasonisthatstudentsdon’thaveagoodhabitwhilestudying.Badeyesightbringstroubletoourlifeandstudy.Forexample.Ifweleaveourglassesathome,w
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