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PartA应用文写作
应用文写作得分要点:
1.格式和语域
2.覆盖所有要点(一般为三个)
3.语言正确
4.高级词汇、句型
一书信
商务信件或公函(BusinessLetterorOfficialCorrespondence)
私人信件(PrivateLetter)
英语书信通常包括下面几个组成部分:
信头(Heading)
信内地址(InsideAddress)
1.称呼(Salutation)
2.正文(Body)
3.结束语(ComplimentaryClose)
4.签名(Signature)
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
缩进式:
1.称呼(Salutation)称呼后用逗号
1)写给机构
不认识负责人:
DearSirorMadam,
ToWhomItMayConcern,
认识负责人:
DearMr.President,
DearMr.Wang,
DearPresidentWang,
2)写给个人
关系不亲密:
DearMr.President,
DearMr.Wang,
DearPresidentWang,
关系亲密:
DearMichael,
2.正文(Body)严格按要求写全要点
首段1-2句寒暄/自我介绍+写作目的
中间段3句1.改写提纲中要点一
2.改写要点二
(3.改写要点三)
尾段1-2句表示感谢+期待回信
3.客套语:
Sincerelyyours,Yourssincerely,Sincerely=friendly/lovely/cordially/respectfully
4.署名:
英语一:
LiMing
英语二:
ZhangWei
正文:
三个自然段
语言:
自然,非正式化(给朋友写信);正式化(复习难点给一些机构或者比较正式的人写信)
第一段:
1.自我介绍
Iamliminganeditor/oneofthepassagers/chairmanofthestudents’Union,who从句中的内容就是指令中的内容
Whohasbeenworkingforourmagazineforfiveyears
Whoispossibleforthehalf-skymagazine
Whocaresmuchaboutthedevelopmentofyourlibrary
Presently,IworkasateachingassistantinXcollegeinLosAngeles,California,UAS
Iam21,sophomoreofNanjinginternationalstudiesuniversity,majoringinbusinessenglish
Iamapart-timeworkerinyourcompanyduringthissummervacation
Iamsandylee,anundergraduatestudentofthedepartmentofelectricalandcomputerengineering
Asacollegestudentwhocansupportmyselffinancially.
2问候:
howhaveyoubeenrecently?
Howarethingsgoingwithyou/yourworkthesedays?
Iwonderif/hopethateverythinggoessmoothlywithyourecently
Ithasbeenalongtimesincewemeteachotherinbeinglasttime
3.写信目的
Iamwritingthisletterto(13种目的)
Iamwritingtheletterinpurposeofexpressingmy+主题名词toyoufor+事件
Thepurposeoftheletterthatiamwritingistoexpressmy+主题名词toyoufor+事件
4.提及来信
Iamsohappytohear/learnfromyou/youremaillastweekthatyoucouldcometostudyinnanjingthisSeptember
Iamveryhappytohearfromyoulastweek,youhavetoldmeinyourletterthat....对方写信的内容
Iamveryhappy/sorry/exitedtolearnfromyourletter/emaillastweekthat....对方写信的内容
Ireceivealetterfromyoulastweekwhichsaysthat.....对方写信的内容
不同的万能结尾句
Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply/visit/response
Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration
Oncemore,pleaseacceptmysincerethanks/bestwishes
Iwouldbegreatlygratefulifyouwouldgrantmeachanceforaninterview.
Iwouldbegratefulificouldhaveareply
Iwouldbeverygratefulifmysuggestionsaretakenintoconsideration
1)感谢
因为某事而向您表达我真诚的谢意。
express(extend/convey/voice)mysincere(heartfelt)gratitude(appreciation)foryourassistance(help)insth./indoingsth.
在我备考考研过程中给了我一些帮助
InmypreparationfortheCGRE.
2)投诉
投诉信
投诉信的写作策略:
说明投诉问题——描述具体情况——期待解决方案。
Attention!
写投诉信时语气要冷静、郑重、克制,不必过于礼貌。
但也要就事论事,不能进行人身攻击。
同时,在描述问题时尽量采用被动句式,使描述更加客观合理。
因为某事而向您表达我的不满或失望。
比如说在网上买了一些东西,当你不满意时才会投诉,投诉这个词最基本意思就是抱怨:
complainabout.
expressmydissatisfactionordisappointmentforyourfailuretodosth.
没能按时送货deliverthegoodsintime.
3)道歉
道歉信
道歉信的写作策略:
表示道歉——说明具体原因、提出补救办法——再次致歉,希望得到理解。
因为某事而向您表达我诚挚的歉意。
expressmyheartfeltapologyformyfailuretodosth.
attendthemeeting.
4)祝贺(congratulationstoyou)
conveymycongratulationsfromthebottomofmyheartforyourbeingadmittedtoyourtargetuniversity.(被理想院校录取)
2011年英语二假如你的堂兄弟姐妹考上大学了,写一封信表达祝贺并建议。
5)欢迎(welcome)
因为某事而向您表达热烈的欢迎
extendmywarmwelcometoyouforyourcomingto/visitingSP.(visingmycollege)
6)询问
咨询信
咨询信的写作策略:
介绍自己、提出请求——说明原因及其他事项——表达谢意、期盼答复。
注意:
由于提出的咨询往往都是需要麻烦别人的事情,所以要注意语气的礼貌程度,不要吝啬你的感谢。
有关某事而询问一些信息
inquire(about)someinformationconcerningsth.(参考书referencebook)
7)寻物
寻求您的帮助,以找到我曾经失去的事物
requestyourassistancetofindmywalletwhichwaslostduringmystayatyourhoteltheotherday.(severaldaysearlier)
8)求职
求职信
求职信的写作策略:
表明对职位感兴趣——自己素质的描述——期望回复
申请你几天前在中国日报上所刊登的职位
applyforthevacancy(position)whichwaslistedinChinaDailytheotherday.
9)辞职(quit/giveup/resignfromone’sjob)
告诉你我已经决定从现职位辞职
informyouofmydecisiontoresignfromthecurrentposition.
informyouthatIhavedecidedto...
10)推荐
推荐信
推荐信在开头和结尾与求职信略有不同。
开头要说明写信人与被推荐人的关系,结尾要借推荐人之口说“雇用他将会是一个明智的选择”,并表示“信息可与我联系”。
向您推荐一个人作为某个职位的候选人
recommendBobtoyouasanidealcandidateforthechairmanofthestudentunion.
11)请求(请假)
请求您允许我去做某事
requestyourpermissionsoastoallowmetobeabsentfromtoday’sclass.
12)邀请
询问您是否方便来参加某项活动
inquirewhetheritisconvenientforyoutopresentyourself/attend/participateinthemeetingwhichwillbeheld地点,时间
13)建议
建议信
注意事项:
建议信和投诉信在某些情况下既有相同,又有不同,在改进质量的建议和忠告方面应该有很多的共通点,但如果是关于个人的重大决定就不应该用很生硬的语言了。
有关某事向您提出一些有建设性的建议
offeryousomeconstructivesuggestions(tips/proposals)concerningsth.
第二段
1)具体背景(过去)
我现在仍然记得当时的场景
SofarIcanstillrecallthescenewhen...
2)具体列举原因
具体的原因如下:
其一,其二,其三
Thedetailedandconcretefactorsareasfollow:
其一:
firstly,firstofall,firstandforemost,tobeginwith,onthetopofthelist,aboveall
其二:
secondly,furthermore,moreover,plus,inaddition
其三:
thirdly,finally,lastbutnotleast
3)具体列举条件
我想知道,您是否方便将以下条件考虑在内
Iwonderwhetheritispossibleforyoutotakethefollowingrequirementsintoconsideration(account)
4)具体建议列举
为了改善或提高您的服务,再次提出一些有建设性的意见,以供您参考。
Inordertoimproveyourservice,herearesomeconstructivesuggestionsforyoutoadopt/follow.
第三段:
1)表达感谢
您能抽出时间考虑此事,我将感激不尽。
Yourtimeandconsiderationinthismatterwouldbehighlyappreciated.
Iwouldfeelobligedtoyouifyoucandosth.
2)道歉不便
我为给您带来的不变而深表歉意。
IfeelterriblyregretfulforanyinconveniencewhichIhavecausedtoyou.
3)要求解决(投诉信)
我强烈地要求您能尽快解决此事。
Istronglyrequestthatyoucandealwithsuchmatterassoonaspossible.
4)提出希望
我真诚地希望:
您能够同意我的辞职;以上建议能够对您有所帮助;能够有机会深层次探讨(推荐电影)
Isincerelyhopethat/itismysincerehopethatyoucanapproveofmyresignation.
theabove-mentionedtipscanbeofanyhelptoyou.
wecanhavetheopportunitytodiscussthismatterinfurtherdetails.
5)表达期望
我期待着您尽快回信/到来
Iamlookingforwardtoyourpromptreply/arrivalatyourearliestconvenience.
6)联系方式
欲知详情,请联系...
Formoreinformation,don’thesitatetocontactusat88888888(电话/地址)
7)随信附件(建议或求职不可能所有信息都包含在信件内容内)
随信您会发现某某附件
Enclosedareresume,scorereport,letterofrecommendation,meetingarrangementoragendaorschedule.
二通知告示
写作策略:
写明相关信息,如时间、地点——简单说明活动内容或背景一一署名。
1.标题实词第一个字母大写
2.日期标题下一行右下方
3.正文
4.署名
通知标题
Notice
Announcement
NoticeofaDecision
NoticeofDismissal
注意:
1.通知告示的要件(报名方式,地址,截止日期等)
2.语域一般较为正式
三备忘录
是公司或者部门内部的通讯形式,主要是员工之间传达信息,比如会议安排、情况通报、问题处理等。
其内容要求简明准确,句式要求完整。
To:
WangJie,ManagerofMarketingDepartment
From:
BrianAponte
Date:
November18,2013
Subject:
ArrangementsfortheShanghaiConference
一.道歉信(LetterofApology)
常用句式(开头段直接交代目的):
道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话
I am writing this letter to express my regret…
I am writing to apologize for…
Iwould like to give you my apology for…
Iamverysorrytosaythat…
I must apologize about (not) doing sth…
Please accept my sincere apology for…
I am writing to say sorry for…
Iamterriblysorry,but…
道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套话
Onceagain,I am sorryfor any inconvenience Ihavecaused.
Pleaseallow me to say sorry again.
Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation .
Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies.
I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.
IamsorrythatIcan’t…andtrustthatyouwillbeabletounderstand.
2008年考研英语写作真题
51.Directions:
YouhavejustcomebackfromCanadaandfoundamusicCDinyourluggagethatyouforgottoreturntoBob,yourlandlordthere.Writehimaletterto
1)makeanapology,and
2)suggestasolution.
Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.
Donotsignyourownnameattheendtheletter.Use"LiMing"instead.
Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)
经典范文解析
DearBob,
I’mwritingthelettertoinformyouthatIwishtoexpressmysincereapologytoyou.
Tobeginwith,ItakethisopportunitytoextendmyheartfeltappreciationtothekindassistanceyourendermeduringmystayinCanada.What’smore,IborrowedoneCDofBeethoven’ssymphoniesfromyouinCanada.Unfortunately,whenIreturnedhome,IfoundtomysurprisethattheCDinmypersonalbaggageduetomycarelessness.
Tosolvetheproblem,IwouldliketosendthisCDtoyoubyExpressMailService.Onceagain,pleaseacceptmysincereapologyforanyinconveniencesthatIhavecaused.Ihopethesettlementofthematterwillmeetyourwishes.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
二、辞职信(LetterofResignation)
辞职信开头常用句式和套话
This is to inform you that I intend to resign from my current potion.
I am writing to inform you about my decision of resignation.
I feel very sorry for having to give up my position as...
I feel reluctant to give up my present job, but I...
I am sure it will come as no surprise that I wish to resign my position as...
辞职信结尾常用句式和套话
I sincerely hope that you approve of my resignation. I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Thank you for your caring and consideration in these several yearsworking.
I would appreciate it if you would accept my resignation before...
Thank you very much for offering me the opportunity to work with the outstanding staff here.
My bestwishes for the company’s continued growth.
2005年考研英语写作真题
51.Directions:
TwomonthsagoyougotajobasaneditorforthemagazineDesigns&Fashions.Butnowyoufindthattheworkisnotwhatyouexpected.Youdecidetoquit.Writealettertoyourboss,Mr.Wang,tellinghimyourdecision,statingyourreason(s),andmakinganapology.
Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSH
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