高考英语复习读后续写语法升级技巧解析版.docx
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高考英语复习读后续写语法升级技巧解析版
专题16读后续写:
语法升级技巧(解析版)
Part1倒装
部分倒装表情绪:
Soshockedwashethathestoodthere,open-mouthed.
Reluctantashewas,hejumpedastold.
部分倒装强调动作发生的时间:
Notuntiltheyheardthatshewassafeandsoundweretheirmindssetatrest.
Onlywhenyouputyourheartonitcanthingsbehandledwell.(句尾升华主题)
全部倒装强调主语:
Atthefootofthemountainbeautifullysituatedourcottage.
总结:
写景用全部倒装突出画面,用部分倒装突出动作、情绪、时间。
一、翻译
1.Eric非常着急,使劲敲Adam的门。
SoanxiouswashethatheviolentlyknockedatthedoorofAdam’sroom.
2.尽管Ben对她的礼物感到震惊,她还是不情愿地收下了,站在那里低着头。
Astonishedthough/asBenwasatherpresents,shereceivedthemunwillingly,standingthereandbowingherhead.
3.虽然Jane很虚弱,她还是挣扎着站起来,继续寻求援助。
Weakasshewas,shestruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance.
4.他人生中从没吃过如此美味的食物。
Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingdelicious.
5.黑暗中传来一个他从没听过的声音。
Outofthedarknesscameavoicehehadneverheardbefore.
6.他僵硬的脸上有一种恐惧和仇恨的表情。
Onhisrigidfacetherestoodanexpressionofhorrorandhatred.
7.沉默之后,响起一阵掌声。
Astormofapplausecameaftersilence.
8.直到那时,Megan才说出困扰她一整天的事情。
NotuntilthendidMeganpouredoutwhathadbeendisturbingherthewholeday.
9.这就是成功的秘诀——多一点点努力,多一点点决心,你就能创造出多一点点的奇迹。
Suchisthekeytosuccess—alittlebitmoreeffortsandalittlebitmoredeterminationwillcreatealittlebitmoremiracle.
10.他的脑中闪过了一位英雄战士的形象。
Throughhismindflashedtheimageofaheroicfighter.
Part2虚拟语气
用来表示假设,所陈述的是一个条件,不一定是事实。
虚拟语气通过谓语动词特殊的形式来表示,常用来表达惊异、惋惜、遗憾、理应如此等含义,在读后续写中表达比较强烈的感情。
例:
Without...,sbwould.../Butfor...,sbwould...没有……的话,某人就……
Wishing......,主语+谓语.../主语+谓语...,wishing......某人……,希望……
Ifonly...要是……就好了/但愿……;只要……
Givenonemorechance,Iwould...如果再给我一次机会,我会……
一、单句翻译
1.如果我没跟Tom吵架、走入森林,我现在就不会被困在这个糟糕的地方了!
IfIhadnotquarreledwithTomandgoneintotheforest,Iwouldnotbetrappedintheawfulplacenow!
2.我多么希望我没跟着那只兔子走进森林啊!
HowIwishedIhadnotfollowedtherabbitintotheforest!
IfonlyIhadnotfollowedtherabbitintotheforest!
3.如果我们中有更多人看重家庭而不是金钱,这个世界就会更美好。
Ifmoreofusvaluedfamilyabovemoney,itwouldbeabetterworld.
4.若非你及时的救援,我早就在大火中被烧死了。
Haditnotbeenforyourtimelyrescue,Iwouldhavebeenburnedtodeathinthebigfire.
5.再给我一次机会的话,我再不会以外貌判断一个人。
Givenonemorechance,Iwouldnothavejudgedapersonbyhisappearance.
6.朋友们都在到处跑着,玩得很开心,可Susan却独自坐在草坪上,希望自己此刻在家里。
Thecompanionswererunning,excited,butSusansataloneonthegrass,whishingshewereathomethismoment.
7.如果我是Eric,我会毫不犹豫地拒绝这个无理的请求。
WereIEric,Iwouldhaverefusedtheunreasonablerequirementwithouthesitation.
二、情景写作(用4-5句话描述以下情景,至少三句虚拟语气,注意不是翻译)。
Alex没听妈妈关于洞穴的劝告,被困在黑漆漆的洞里,又害怕又后悔。
Suggestedanswer:
被困在这个黑漆漆的吓人的洞里,Alex害怕又后悔。
要是他听妈妈关于这个洞穴的警告就好了(ifonly)!
他泪流满面,多希望带了手机在身边(wish)!
如果现在有个朋友和他在一起,他也不会这么害怕了。
Trappedintheblackscaringcave,Alexwasfilledwithfrightandregret.IfonlyhehadlistenedtoMum’swarningaboutit!
Hewepthiseyesout,wishinghehadbroughthismobilephonewithhim!
Ifhehadafriendwithhimnow,hewouldnotbesofrightened.
模拟演练01
读后续写 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Afewyearsago,Ihadtakenapart-timeholiday-seasonjobinavideo store atthelocalshoppingmall.Frominsidethestore,I’dbeguntoseethepeoplerushingbyoutside.Thenan elderlywoman caughtmyeye.Althoughslowandunsureofstep,shemovedwithdeliberation(从容),andtherewasnohesitationinhergestures.TheelderlywomanhadcomeintothestorealongwithayoungerwomanwhoIguessedwasherdaughter. Thedaughter wasclearly impatient,rollinghereyes,huffing(长吁短叹) andsighing,checkingherwatcheveryfewseconds.
Theolderwomanthen separated fromtheyoungeroneandbegantotickthroughtheDVDsonthenearestshelf,obviously expecting someoneelsetohelp.Aftertheslightesthesitation,IwalkedoverandaskedifIcouldhelpherfindsomething.Thewomansmiledupatmeandshowedmeatitlescrawled(乱涂乱画的)onapieceofpaper.Itwasabituncleartomakeout.Clearlyapersonlookingforitknewalittleaboutmovies,aboutquality.Ratherthan rushing offtolocatetheDVDforthewoman,IaskedhertowalkwithmesoIcouldshowherwhereshecouldfindit.
Lookingback,IthinkIwantedtoenjoyhercompanyfora moment.Somethingaboutherdeliberatemovementsremindedmeofmyown mother,who’dpassedawaythepreviousChristmas.Aswewalkedalongthebackofthestore,Iintroducedhertothedifferentsections:
oldtelevisionshows,actionmovies,cartoons,sciencefiction.Thewomanseemedgladoftheunrushed company andcasualconversation.
Wefoundthemovie,andIcomplimentedheronherchoice.She smiled andtoldmeitwasoneshe’denjoyedwhenshewasherdaughter’sageandthatshehopedshewouldenjoyitasmuchasshehad.Maybe,shesaidwithahintofwistfulness(一丝渴望),herdaughtercouldenjoyitwithherownyoungchildren.Then,whentheolderwoman’sturninlinecame,shepaidincash,countingoutthedollarsandcoinswiththesamesurenessshe’ddisplayedearlier.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150字左右;
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
AsthecashierputtheDVDintoaplasticbag,Iwalkedovertotheyoungerwoman.
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Paragraph2:
Theelderlywomanmovedwithherdeliberateslownessbacktoherdaughter.
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翻译小练习:
1.“那是你妈妈吗?
“我问,半路希望她告诉我这不关我的事。
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2.但她转了转眼睛说:
“是的。
”我笑着告诉她我不是在批评她。
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3.“珍惜她,”我说。
然后我回答她好奇的表情说:
“当她走后,你会想起这样的小瞬间。
”
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4.这是真的。
我仍然想念我的母亲,想起了那些让她生活悲惨的不耐烦的时刻。
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5.他们一起向音像店的出口走去。
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6.他们肩并肩地站在那里一会儿,等待着奔腾的假日潮流,等待着他们在其中的位置。
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7.然后,女儿瞥了一眼,片刻间注视着她的母亲。
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8.显然,她用明显不习惯的爱搂着母亲的肩膀,轻轻地把她引回到洪水中。
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参考答案:
1.“那是你妈妈吗?
“我问,半路希望她告诉我这不关我的事。
“Isthatyourmom?
”Iasked,halfway expecting hertotellmeitwasnoneofmybusiness.
2.但她转了转眼睛说:
“是的。
”我笑着告诉她我不是在批评她。
Butsherolledhereyesandsaid,“Yeah.”I smiled toshowherIwasn’tcriticizing.
3.“珍惜她,”我说。
然后我回答她好奇的表情说:
“当她走后,你会想起这样的小瞬间。
”
“Cherishher,”Isaid.AndthenIansweredhercuriousexpressionbysaying,“Whenshe’sgone,it’sthelittle moments likethisthat’llcomebacktoyou.”
4.这是真的。
我仍然想念我的母亲,想起了那些让她生活悲惨的不耐烦的时刻。
Itwastrue.ImissedmymotherstillandrememberedthemomentswhenIwasso impatient astomakeherlifemiserable.
5.他们一起向音像店的出口走去。
Togethertheymadetheirwaytowardtheexitofthevideo store.
6.他们肩并肩地站在那里一会儿,等待着奔腾的假日潮流,等待着他们在其中的位置。
Theystoodthereforamoment,sidebyside,waitingforthe rushing holidaycurrentandfortheirplaceinit.
7.然后,女儿瞥了一眼,片刻间注视着她的母亲。
Thenthedaughterglancedoverandmomentarilyregardedher mother.
8.显然,她用明显不习惯的爱搂着母亲的肩膀,轻轻地把她引回到洪水中。
Andslowly,almostreluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomedaffectionaroundhermother’sshouldersandgentlyguidedherbackintothedeluge.
参考范文:
AsthecashierputtheDVDintoaplasticbag,Iwalkedovertotheyoungerwoman.“Isthatyourmom?
”Iasked,halfway expecting hertotellmeitwasnoneofmybusiness.Butsherolledhereyesandsaid,“Yeah.”I smiled toshowherIwasn’tcriticizing.“Cherishher,”Isaid.AndthenIansweredhercuriousexpressionbysaying,“Whenshe’sgone,it’sthelittle moments likethisthat’llcomebacktoyou.”Itwastrue.ImissedmymotherstillandrememberedthemomentswhenIwasso impatient astomakeherlifemiserable.
Theelderlywomanmovedwithherdeliberateslownessbacktoherdaughter.Togethertheymadetheirwaytowardtheexitofthevideo store.Theystoodthereforamoment,sidebyside,waitingforthe rushing holidaycurrentandfortheirplaceinit.Thenthedaughterglancedoverandmomentarilyregardedher mother.Andslowly,almostreluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomedaffectionaroundhermother’sshouldersandgentlyguidedherbackintothedeluge.
模拟演练02
读后续写 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Sallyhadanxietydisordertroublethatmadeherfailtospeakinsocialsituations.I'manurseanduseBellatohelpchildreninmycommunity,tobringthemcomfortandconfidencethewayonlyadogcan.IthoughtbacktothedaywhenI'dfirstbroughtBellatotheschool.
ThatmorninginJanuary,herteacherledustoaroom.“Sallyhasn'tspokenoutsideherhomeintwoyears,"shetoldme.“Herparentshavetakenhertodoctors,butnothinghasworked.” Alittlegirl stood shylyjustinsidethedoorway.Hereyesbrightenedwhenshenoticedmydog.
“ThisisBellaIsaid.“Shedoestricks.Wouldyouliketosee?
"
Sallynodded.Imotionedwithmyhand.Bellalaydownandthenrolledover.
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