短文改错1.docx
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短文改错1
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Iwillcostthissummerholidayinthecountryside.Althoughthecityismodern,buttherearestillsomeproblems,suchasairpollutionandnoisy.InthecountrysideIcanenjoyacomfortableandquitelylife.Where,theairisfreshandthewaterisclean.Treesaregreenandbirdsaresinging.Icangoboating,fishingandswimminginthelake.Icanalsoclimbthehills.Bothofthesewillinterestingandgoodforyourhealth.Aboveall,Icanlearnmoreaboutthenature.SoIwanttogotothecountrysideforachange.Now,Iamlookingforwordtoleave.
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“Yourhappydaysareover,”mybrothersaystomewhenheknewIwasgoingtoasenior highschoolstudent.Thenhecontinuedtotellingmethatseniorschoollifewasboredbecause Iwouldhavealargenumberofhomeworktodoeveryday.Thesubjectsweremanymore difficultthanthatofjuniorschool.However,Iwassurprisedtofindwhatheexperiencedthere wasdifferentwithwhatmybrotherhadtoldme.Totellthetruth,Ireallikedmyseniorschoollife.
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Yousayyouwanttovisitsomanynewplacesaspossibleinthissummer.Idon’tthinkitisagoodidea.IwanttotellyouastoryaboutmyfriendTom.LastJuly,hewenttoEuropeforaholiday.Europewasverybeautifulandhisholidaywasn’tverynice.Hevisitedfourcountries,andstayedineveryofthecountriesonlythreeday.Hevisitedmanymuseumsandfamousplaces,andwasalwaysinhurry.WhenhereturnedbackfromEuropehewasverytired.SoIsuggestyoucanspendyourholidayinadifferentlyway.
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Myhometownwasusedtobeabeautifulplace.Thicktreesandgrasscanbeseeneverywhere.Inordertobuildingmorehousesandgrowmorecrops,peoplecutdownmoreandmoretrees.Withtimewenton,thewholeforestalmostdestroyed.Gradually,greenhillshavechangedforwasteland.Asaresult,sandstormsstrikeusnowbutwesufferalot.SoIdidhopethatallthepeopleshouldrealizetheterribleresultofcuttingdowntreesandtakinggoodcareoftrees fromnowonsoasnottoimproveourlivingconditions.
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Lastweek,whileweweretakenanEnglishexam,oneofmyfriendspassingmeapieceofpaperandaskedmetotellhertheanswersofsomequestions.Ididn’tthinkitwasrighttodothat,Irefused. Whenanexamwasover,Itriedtotalktoher,Butshejustwould’tlistenmeatall.Iknewshemustbeveryangryaboutme.Afterthinkingforawhile,Iwrotealettertoherandhopedtheycouldmakeherunderstandme.Finally,mylettersworkedandnowsheandIweregoodfriendsagain.
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Itwasthefirsttimehehadgonetoworkinarestaurant.Mybosscompainedthattherewerefewcustomercomingfordinner.Iaminvitedtohaveamealthere.Afterorderedtwoicecreamsandasteak,andIbegantotimehowlongitwouldtakethecooktogetthemready.Itookoutabooktoreadit.Tomydisppointment.Iwaitedfor35minutesaftermymealwasready.Irealizedthatwaittoolongwasreasonwhybusinesswasnotgood.Iwroteareportofmyfindingsandpresentittotheboss.
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Duringthevacation,theweatherwashotandIcoulddomuchwork,butIlivedhappily.OnthemorningIusuallygotupearlyandtakeawalkinthegarden.Afterthebreakfast,IbeganreadingEnglishanddidsomeexercisesinmaths.Iworkedquitehardlyandmadegoodprogress.Ispentnearlythewholeafternoonoutside.Iwentswimintheriveranddidn’tcomebackwhenitwasaboutfiveorsix.Sometimesafriendofmewouldcometoseemeandwewouldspendsomehourslistenedtomusic.InthiswayIspentmyvacationhappily.Inotonlystudiedwellandbutalsobecameagoodswimmer.
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Thereisafamoussaying,“HewhohasneverbetotheGreatWallisnottrueman.”ThismorningmyclassmatesandIgetupearlytovisittheGreatWall.Wewentthereonbus.Onthewaythere,wesawmanytallbuildingsoneithersideoftheroad.Aboutanhours’drivebroughtustotheGreatWall.Whenitwasappearedinfrontofus,wecouldn'thelpsaying,“Whatgreatitis!
”WhenwewalkedontheGreatWall,wefeltverypride.Todayithasbecomeaplaceofinteresttopeoplealltheworld.Weshoulddoourbesttoprotectthemasitis.
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AfterIfinishedtheschoolthisyear,Ibegantolookforwork.Butseveralmonthlater,Istillhadn’tfoundthejobthatIwasinterested.OnlastSundaymorningIreceivedaphonecallfromamancallinghimMr.Smith.Hesaidtomeonthephone,“Ihearthatyoudoverywellinyourstudies.Imayhaveajobforyou.”Ienteredhisofficewithbeatingheart.HowIhopedthat Iwillgothroughthejob-huntingtalktodayandhewouldgivemethejobasalabassistant.Buttomysurprised,whatheneededwerejustamodel.
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Manystudentsfindithardlytospeakorreadinfrontofothers.Trytakingadeepbreathe torelaxafteryoubegin,andthenreadslowlyandclearly.Itmighthelptopractisereadaloud tofamilymembersatthehome.Readingaloudisaopportunitytogetusedtospeakingtoanaudience.Themoreoftenyoudo,themorecomfortableandconfidentyouwillprobablefeel.Inthisway,notonlyyougainconfidence,butalsoyoucanreceiveadvicesfromyourparents.
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Twoboyssatonabeachtalkinghappywhileeatingawatermelon.Whentheywentawaytheyleavethemelon’sskinsonthebeach,makingitverydirt.Theydidn’twanttotaketroublethrowingitintothedustbinthoughitwasverynearthattheyweresitting.Theysaidthat therewouldbesomeoneshouldcleantherubbish.Ifeveryonebehavesbythisway,theworldwillbeabigrubbishdumpwithfliesareflyingroundandpeoplewillliveinaworldofdiseases.Besides,itwillbemoredifficultfordustmentocleaningtheworldwherewelivein.
参考答案
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1.cost 改为spend 2.去掉but 3.noisy改为noise 4.quitely改为quite 5.where改为there 6.both改为all 7.will后加be 8.your改为my 9.去掉nature前的the 10.leave改为leaving
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1.says改为said 2.to后加be 3.去掉contined后的to 4.bored改为boring 5.number改为deal 6.everyday改为everyday 7.many改为much 8.that改为those
9..he改为I 10.real改为really
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1.so---as 2.去掉in 3.Europe后was—is 4.and—but 5.every—each 6.day—days 7.in后加a 8.去掉back或return—came 9.去掉you后的can 10.differently—different
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1.去掉was 2.building改为build 3.With改为As 4.almost后加was 5.for改为into 6.but改为and 7.did改为do 8.result改为results 8.taking改为take 9.去掉not
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1.taken改为taking 2.passing改为passed 3.of改为to 4.I前加so
5.an改为the 6.listen后加to 7.about改为with 8.they改为it
9.letters改为letter 10.were改为are.
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1.he改为I 2.customer改为customers 3.am改为was 4.ordered改为ordering 5.去掉and 6.去掉read后的it 7.after改为before 8.wait改为waiting
9.在reason前加the 10.present改为presented
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1.do前加not 2.on改为in 3.take改为took 4.去掉breakfast前的the
5.hardly改为hard 6.swim改为swimming 7.when改为until 8.me改为mine
9.listen改为listening 10.去掉and
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1.be改为been 2.not后加a 3.get改为got 4.on改为by 5.hours’改为hour’s 6.去掉was 7.what改为How 8.pride改为proud 9.all后加over 10.them改为it
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1.去掉shool前的the 2.month后加s 3.interested后加in 4.去掉last前的on
5.him改为himself 6.do改为did 7.with后加a 8.will改为would
9.surprised改为surprise 10.were改为was
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1.hardly改为hard 2.breathe改为breath 3.after改为before 4.read改为reading 5.去掉the 6.a改为an 7.do后改为it 8.probable 9.only后加can
10.advices改为advice
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1.happy改为happiy 2.leave改为left 3.dirt改为dirty4.throwing后的it改为them
5.第一个that改为where 6.someone后加who 7.by改为in 8.去掉flies后的are 9.cleaning改为clean 10.where改为that/which或将in去掉
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