作文评讲.docx
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作文评讲
一.常用句式:
1.读后感受
Iwasreallymoved/touched/angry/inspired/ashamed/astonished/shockedafterIread…because…
Havingknownaboutthestoryof…Iwastouchedby…
ThemomentIfinishedreadingthestory,Iwaslostinthought.Idobelieve…
2.叙述经历
Thisstoryremindsmeofasimilarexperienceofbeingdoubted.
Ioncehadanunforgettable/similarexperiencethat…
Itoccurredtomethatmyfriendhadasimilarexperience.
Oneofmyfriends’experiencesisaconvincingexample.
二.注意
1.单词的拼写;动词的过去式、过去分词的拼写。
2.时态的运用。
(个人经历要用过去时态)
3.避免中文式英语(加强朗读、背诵模版和热点话题)
YeShiwen,a16-year-oldswimmerplayer,reactedtothedoubtwhethershewashonestbyperformingbestagaininanotherevent,whowasfacedwithsuspicions(怀疑)ofdopingafterherfirstexcellentperformanceintheOlympic.
Afterreadingthepassage,IamimpressedbyYeShiwen’sperformance.Sheprovedherinnocence(无辜)byheractionsandgainedrespectandadmiration(敬慕)fromtheworld.
YeShiwen’sstoryremindsmeofasimilarexperiencewhenIstudiedinjuniorschool.Iwasalwayspooratmathsduringtheperiod,butIworkedhardtoimproveit.Theninafinalexamination,Igotfirstplaceinmathsunexpectedly,whichcausedahotdiscussioninmyclass,someofwhomdoubtedwhetherIhadcheatedintheexam.Icouldn’tmakethembelievethatIwashonest,andfeltdiscouragedatonetime(一度,曾经),However,ItoldmyselfthatImustprovemyhonestybyperformingbetter.Inthenexttests,Iperformedwellatmathsallthetime,andgotmyclassmates’respectandadmiration.
Therefore,itgoeswithoutsayingthatweshouldbelieveinourselveswhenbeingdoubtedanddon’ttakeitseriouslywhathasnotbeenproved.
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