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书信作文写作方法
书信体作文应遵循的原则
1.格式要正确、规范。
对于书信体作文,阅卷教师首先关注的是格式。
如果格式出现重大问题,阅卷教师对作文的整体印象就会受到影响。
2.语气要因人、因事而异。
如果写信的对象是长辈或上级领导,语气中要流露出尊重、委婉、礼貌;如果是同辈或朋友,语气要友好、亲切、平等。
无论采用何种语气,一定要贯穿全篇,在称呼、正文和信尾套语中都有所体现。
3.表达要清楚、简洁。
书信体作文最忌含糊其辞、模棱两可。
因此,信的开头最好开门见山,让对方清楚地了解到写信人的意图。
同时,在把意思表达清楚的前提下,尽可能做到惜墨如金、简洁明了。
4.选词要准确、具体。
书信体作文切忌选用笼统、抽象的词。
否则,会给人以空泛的感觉。
例如,"打开词典包装"中的"打开",用unsealed或unwrapped要比opened具体、生动得多。
再如,"匆忙返回教室",如写成wentbacktotheclassroomquickly就显得平淡无奇,但如果换成hurriedbacktotheclassroom不仅能准确达意,而且有活灵活现之感。
5.句式要有多样性。
书信作文如同其他类型的作文,也要注意句式的变化。
同一个意思可通过多种句式来表达:
既可用主动式也可用被动式,既可用肯定式亦可用否定式,既可用正常语序也可用倒装语序,既可用简单句也可用主从复合句。
只有各种句式的结合并用,作文才会显得丰富多彩、富有生气。
附:
常见应用文范文(供参考)
1.LettersofCongratulations
(1)祝贺圣诞节及新年
Dec.24,2001
DearAnneandJerry,
AmerryChristmasandahappyNewYeartoyou!
AllowmetoofferyouSeason'sGreetingontheadventofwhatwillsurelybeabrightandprosperousNewYear.Itrustthatyouandyourfamilyareenjoyingthisholidayseasoninexcellenthealth.
Myfamily,whoarewellandhappy,joinmeinmygoodwishes.Mayeveryyearunite
ourheartsmoreclosely.
Yourverysincerely,
Barbara
advent出现,到来
holidayseason节期
(2)毕业贺信
June27,2001
DearMrs.Taylor,
WehearthatyoursonPaulhasgraduatedfromthenotableM.I.Twithhonors.Youmustbequitehappywithhissplendidaccomplishment.Heisdoubtlesslyaprideofyourfamily.
Weareveryhappyforyouandwishtoextendtoyouourutmostcongratulations.Ibelievethattheknowledgehehasacquiredwillenablehimtobesuccessfulin
whatevercallinginlifehemayenter.
Withbestwishesforhissuccessandhappiness.
Sincerelyyours,
MyraT.Clark
M.I.T麻省理工学院(简称)
withhonors以优异成绩
splendidaccomplishment卓著的造诣
2.LetterofThanks
(1)感谢老同学赠送礼物
May18,2005
DearLaura,
Iwastrulyenrapturedbeyondexpressiontoreceiveyourflowerswhichturnedourlivingroomintoagarden.Howconsiderateandwonderfulofyoutoremembermy
birthday.Youjustcouldn'thaveselectedanythingI'dhavelikedmore!
Youhave
apositivegeniusforselectingtherightgift!
ThefouryearsIspentwithyouatthecollegehavebeenthepleasantestperiod
inmylife.Iwillcherishthismemoryforever.Howniceitwouldbetoseeyouagain.
Youhavebeenmorethankind,andIwon'teverforgetit.Myloveanddeepestgratitude,nowandalways!
Sincerelyyours,
Jane
beenraptured欣喜若狂
beyondexpression难以表达,形容不出
Youjustcouldn'thaveselectedanythingI'dlikemore!
你所选择的礼物是我最喜欢的了。
(2)感谢友人赠送书刊
July8,2005
DearMr.Peterson,
IwasthrilledandexcitedwhenIreceivedthebook“ModernEnglish”yousentme.It'sindeedaninvaluablebookandarealhelptothestudyoftheEnglishlanguage.Whatapreciousbook!
Thankyoueversomuchforyourgenerosityandthoughtfulness.
ManyofmycolleagueshaveconstantlymentioneditsmeritsandIshouldsaythat
itistheonlybookofitskindwhichsuggesttotheChinesestudentswaystoread,writeandspeakEnglishtotheirgreatbenefit.Itis,infact,akeytothemasteryofidiomaticEnglish.
Irepeatmythanks,inwhichmywifejoinsme.
Sincerelyyours,
AnthonyStewart
Iwasthrilledandexcited…我十分激动
toone'sbenefit使某人获益
keyto…的决窍
idiomaticEnglish地道的英语
3.LettersofIntroduction
(1)介绍两个朋友相识
Sep.4,2005
DearMr.Breen,
MyintimatefriendDr.Reidisgoingtoyourcitynextweektodeliveralecture
onpsychologicallinguistics.Ihavegivenhimyouraddressandtoldhimhemight
callonyouforassistanceincaseofneed.However,youneedn'tbotheraboutcontactinghimuntilhecomestomeetyou,asIknowyouarebusyandsowillhebeforthetimebeing.
IhavelongwantedyouandMr.Reidtomeeteachother,andI'mhappytotakethisopportunitytobringyoutogether.Heisamanofknowledgeasyouare.I'dappreciateanythingyoucoulddotomakehisstayinyourcitymoreenjoyable—andIknowhewould,too.
WithkindestregardstoyouandCatherine.
Cordiallyyours,
ArthurNorman
deliveralecture举办讲座
incaseofneed万一需要的话
forthetimebeing暂时,眼下
(2)向朋友介绍自己的表弟
Oct.9,2004
DearLaura,
ThiswillintroducetoyouEdwardBrewster,mycousin,whoisgoingtospendthewinterinNewYorkgatheringmaterialanddoingresearchforanewbook.Asheisanentirestrangerinyourlocality,willyoukindlyconducthimtoacomfortable
hotel.IknowhowbusyyouareandIdon'twantyoutoregardthisasanobligation.ButI'msureyou'llenjoymeetinghimandonceyoumeethim,you'llwanttokeeponseeinghim!
ForBrewster'sgoodcompanyanywhere—atbridge,chess,tennisorjusttalk.HeisjustaboutthemostbrilliantandentertainingconversationalistIknow.
Idon'tneedtotellyouhowmuchI'llpersonallyappreciateanycourtesiesyoushowhim.
Affectionately,
Ellen
locality地方,场所
obligation义务
goodcompany好的同伴
4.LettersofRecommendation
(1)推荐家庭教师
May30,2005
DearMr.Franklin,
IampleasedtorecommendMiss.Parkertoyou.Sheisgoingtorespondtoyourwantad.foragovernessforyourfive-year-oldson.Sheismyformerclassmateand
Ihavefoundherveryintelligent,honestandalwaysjovial.SheiswellversedinbothEnglishandChineseliterature.Ifyouhavenotyetmadeyourchoice,pleasespareherafewminutestoobserve,atleast,herpersonalityandIfeelcertainyouwillbeinterested.Ishallbeverygladtoanswerpersonallyanyinquiriesabouther.
Yourkindattentiontothiswillbehighlyappreciated.
Cordiallyyours,
HildaPowell
respondto响应
wantad.招聘广告
jovial爽快的,愉快的
beversedin对…精通
(2)推荐译员
Nov.5,2004
DearSir,
Mr.Turner,thebearer,wishesapositionastranslator.Hehasbeeninmyemployasatranslatorfornearlyfouryearsduringwhichhegavemeeverysatisfaction.
HisknowledgeofEnglishissoundandamplysufficientforallpracticalpurposes.Heisanexcellentpenman,industriousandthoroughlyreliableineveryway.IamconfidentthatIcan'trecommendhimtoohighly,andwithhimeverysuccesswithyou.
Trulyyours,
JohnSmith
bearer持有人
amply充分地,丰富地
industrious勤奋的
Ican'trecommendhimtohighly.我怎样推荐他,都不会过分。
5.LettersofSympathyandSolicitude
(1)慰问病中之友
July7,2001
DearJane,
I'mverysorrytohearthatyouhavebeentakenillandhavebeeninbedforsometime.Icannotstillbelieveit,asyoulookedsolivelywhenIsawyoulast.
Ihopethatbythetimethisnotereachesyou,you'llbefeelingagreatdealbetter.I'msurethatitwon'tbelongbeforeyouareentirelyandcompletelyyourselfagain.I'msendingyouanovelandIhopeyoulikeit,andthatitwillhelptopassthetimemorepleasantly.
Youknowthatifthere'sanythingIcando,pleasedon'thesitatetoletmeknow.
Yoursasever,
Sonya
beoneself康复
topassthetimemorepleasantly比较愉快地度过这段时间
(2)慰问在车祸中受伤的朋友
Jan.15,2005
DearTom,
Wewereshockedandsaddenedbeyondwordsbynewsofthecarcrash.Butweweregrateful,too,thatyourinjurieswerenottooserious.
Yourfamilytellsusthatyouareprogressingnicely,andthatyou'llbeoutofthehospitalinabouttendays.Wearecertainlyrelievedtoknowthat!
Wearesendingsomebookswethinkyou'llenjoy.Ihopetohearverysoonthatyouarewell.
Faithfullyyours,
Bob
beyondwords难于表达的,言词所不及的
Butweweregrateful,too…庆幸的是
6.LettersofInquiry
(1)询问健康状况
May8,1998
DearTom,
Youhavebeeninthehospitalforoveramonth.ButIdidn'tlearnofyourillnessuntilyesterdayafternoonbecauseofmylongnegligenceinwritingtoyou,forwhichIsincerelyaskforyourpardon.
Howisyourrecentcondition?
Icaneasilyimaginethepainofthediseaseyouarehavingnow,especiallysincetheweatherisgloomyanditrainsfromtimetotime.
Pleasetakegoodcareofyourself.OneofthesedaysI'dliketocallonyouinpersontoseehowyouaredoing.
Yoursever,
Hob
askforyourpardon敬请原谅
gloomy郁闷
callon拜访,探望
inperson亲自
(2)询问有关奖学金事宜
Apr.10,2005
DearSir,
Ihaveafavortoaskyou.MysonBillisatpresentaseniorstudentattheNo.1HighSchoolanddesirestogotoEnglandafterfinishingtheaboveschool,tostudyEnglishliteratureatauniversityorcollegethere.
IhaveheardthatanumberofscholarshipsareofferedtocollegestudentsinEngland.Wouldyoubegoodenoughtogivethenecessaryinformationaboutthem,sothatIcanseeifmysoniseligibletoapply?
Andwillyoukindlyrecommendsome
collegestherewhichenjoythehighestreputation?
Withmanyapologiesfortroublingyou.
Yourssincerely,
HowardPayne
beeligibleforsth./beeligibletodosth.适合,合格
reputation声誉
7.LettersofApology
(1)失约道歉
Nov.19,2004
DearMr.Harkness,
MuchtomyregretIwasunabletokeepmyengagementtomeetyouattheparkgate.Ifearyouaredispleasedatmyfailingtokeepmypromise,butItrustyouwillforgiveme.Letmeexplain.Mymotherwassuddenlytakensickearlyyesterdaymorning,andIhadtosendhertohospital.
Ishallbeobligedifyouwillkindlywriteandtellmewhenandwherewemaymeetagain.Ihopetoseeyousoon.
Yourssincerely,
EvelynMcCormack
Muchtomyregret非常使人抱歉的是
bedispleasedat不愉快
betakensick(orill)得病
(2)因推迟约期而道歉
Oct.19,2005
DearMr.Bruce,
IwritetoapologizeforhavinghadtoputyouoffonMonday.Asmybrotherexplainedtoyou,anemergencyatourcorporationforcedmetoleavetownunexpectedlyandIhave,infact,onlyjustgotback.
Isincerelyhopethatthislast-minutecancellationofourmeetingdidnotinconvenienceyoutoomuchandthatyouwillunderstandwhatpromptedit.CanwemeetnextMondayinstead,atthesameplaceandtime?
Failingthat,dopleasesuggestamoreconvenientday,asIlookforwardtoseeing
you.
Sincerelyyours,
DorothyEvans
emergency紧急任务、情况;突然事件
last-minutecancellation临时取消
8.LettersofApplication
(1)申请工作
May25,1999
DearSirs,
IamlookingforapositioninanengineeringdepartmentinwhichImayusemytrainingincomputerscience
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