英语同等学力写作讲义.docx
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英语同等学力写作讲义
同等学力作文
1.认真审题,判断文体
1.列好提纲,提纲的内容为每段的主题句,结论句和重要的支持句。
注意思维尽可能简单,避免出现不熟悉,无法用英语表达或过于复杂的内容。
3.工整书写,可读
4.适度套用熟悉的句型,格言,警句,提高档次。
5.适度预留间隙,方便修改
6.按要求充分使用已给的信息。
注意篇幅
7.避免无谓失分
把握转承启合
OnUsingInternet
Nowadays,(启)moreandmoreuniversitystudentshaveaccesstoInternet.(引出话题)Itisestimatedthat(适度使用句型)about80%students(会编造数据,事实)ofBeijinguniversitysurfontheInternetforaveragely2hours会编造数据,事实everyday.
Indeed,(承),moststudenthavefullyrealizedtheusesandoftheInternet,but(转)theyhavenotcametorealizetheharmsoftheInternetthathasbroughtothem.Inaddition,(承)somestudentsevenholdthattheycannotlivewithoutInternet.
However,(转)theharmstheInternethasbeendoingtoyoungstudentsarereallyserious.(主题句)Tobeginwith,(启)stayingtoolonginfrontofthecomputerscreencandefinitelydamagetheeyesoftheyoungpeople.Accordingto(承)asurveyissuedbyamedicinecompany,about50%会编造数据ofthestudentshavetheproblemofeyes.Second,(承)beinglostintheInternetwillalsowastealotoftimeforreadingsomemorevaluablethings.Lastly,(承)Internetmaymaketheyounginaworldfilledwithsomeillusionarystories.Someoftheadolescentsevencommitcrimes.
Apparently,(合)surfingontheInternettoolongismoreharmfulthanwehaveimagined.
议论文
1.结构:
提出问题,分析问题,解决问题
2.题型
(1)正反对比和作者态度型
Outline:
有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作。
因为
有些人喜欢经常更换工作,因为
我的看法
(2)问题解决型myviewonfakecommodities
假冒伪劣商品的危害
如何杜绝假冒伪劣商品
(3)现象对比和态度题
Myviewonthenegativeeffectsofsomeadvertisements
Outline
现在有许多不良商业广告
这些广告的副作用和危害
我对这些广告的态度
范文
Myviewonopportunity
Peoplehavedifferentattitudetowardsopportunity.(主题句,引论句)somebelievethatopportunityisrare,whileotherssaythateveryonealmosthasopportunities.Iwouldagreewiththelatterpointofview.(表明自己的观点和态度)Ibelievethateveryoneintheworldcanmeetmoreorlessopportunitiesinhislife.(拓展,阐述)Theproblemisthatwhetheronecangraspthatopportunity.(阐述,说的具体,明白提出问题段落).
Nowadays,Chinaisdevelopingsorapidlythatthereappearmoreandmorechancesandopportunitiesforusyouth.(理由)Forexample(举例),thereisagreatincreaseinjobopportunitieswiththeopening-up.weshouldstudyhardandtrytoimproveusinallaspectsandthuswewillhavethecompetencetogetthebestjobopportunitiesaftergraduation(如何).Asamatteroffact,例证IhavewitnessedseveralclassmateswhoaregoodatEnglishworkingaspart-timersinsomecompanies.Theycannotonlyputtheirknowledgeintopractice,butalsoearnsomemoneytocovertheirlifeexpensesatcollege.(分项问题)
Inaword,therearereallyplentyofopportunitiesavailabletous.Theonlyprecondition(对观点的补充和完善)forourgettingtheseopportunitiesisthequalificationwehavetoown,inotherwords,chancesandopportunitiesonlysmiletothosewhoareready.(结论)
CollegeGraduatesWorkasVillageOfficials”.GivenOutline;
Somecollegegraduateschoosetoworkasvillageofficials.
1.Doyouthinkitisagoodidea?
2.Whatcantheyofferthecountryside?
3.Whatcantheygainfromtheirvillagepositions?
参考范文1CollegeGraduatesWorkasVillageOfficials
Today,collegegraduateschoosetoworkatcountrysidetoservepeoplethereandithasgraduallybecomeatrend.(进入话题)Tothis,manypeopleshowtheirgreatconcern.
Therearemanyreasonsaccountforthisphenomenon.(主题句,态度)Tobeginwith,moreandmoregraduatesliketoworkinbigcities,becausebigcitiescangivethemmanydevelopmentchancessuchasmanyjobvacancies,goodenvironmentofscientificresearch.Butontheotherhand,thecompetitiontostayinbigcitiesisveryhighandonlyfewcanfindsatisfactoryjobs.Secondly,workingasvillageofficialscanbringlotsofbenefitstocollegegraduates.Forexample,onecanusehisknowledgeeffectivelyandpurposelytohelpraisehensandpigs.Thirdly,inthecountryside,collegestudentscanenjoyfreshair,whichisverygoodtotheirhealth.
Tosummarize,Ithinkworkingasvillageofficialsisthebestchoiceforcollegegraduateswhoarelookingforjobsnow.
评价:
内容与要求不尽相符,引言不太自然,过于直接
参考范文2
CollegeGraduatesWorkasVillageOfficials
Mostpeoplewanttoworkinthebiganddevelopedcities(suchasShenzhen,Shanghai.)(可以去掉,无关内容)But,nowthesituationhaschanged.Withthedevelopmentofthesocietyandtheconstantincreaseofjob-huntingpressure,(引言:
要自然,言简意赅)(进入话题)Somecollegegraduatesprefertoworkasvillageofficialsintheruralareas,Ithinkitisagoodidea.(按要求写,表明观点和态度)
First,itnotonlycaneasethejob-huntingpressureinthebigcities,butalsocanmakethecollegegraduateshavemorejobchances.Second,thecollegegraduatescanbringtheadvancedscienceandtechnologytoremoteruralareas.Forexample,(适度举例)theycanteachthevillagershowtofeedthepigseffectivelyandplantthefruitsandvegetablesscientifically,whichcanhelpthevillagersleadawealthylifeinashorttime.Third,thecollegegraduatescanexercisethemselvesinthepoorlivingcondition.TheycanknowmuchmoreaboutChinesefarmers,theymayhaveabetterandlargerplatformtodisplaytheirtalentsandabilities.
Inaword,(列举原因一般以三个为宜,少了篇幅不够,多了拖沓。
必须适时结束)Iaminfavorofthisidea,andIwishIcouldbeavillageofficialaftergraduation.
“WhetherCollegeStudentsShouldBeAllowedtoGetMarried”.YouOutline:
1.Chooseeitherofthetwopositions:
Collegestudentsshould(not)be
allowedtogetmarried.
2.Stateyourreasonsfororagainsttheissue.
3.Conclusion.
参考范文
Thereismuchdiscussion(引言,导入话题)nowadaysastowhetherornotcollegestudentsshouldbeallowedtogetmarried.Somepeoplethink(对discussion内容简介)itishumanistictoallowcollegestudentstogetmarried,whileothers对discussion内容简介believethatitmaymakeafar-reachingnegativeimpactuponthestudent’sstudy.Wereitleftformetodecide(委婉,客气)whethercollegestudentsshouldbeallowedtogetmarriedornot,Iwouldnothesitateamomenttopreferthelatter.(按要求清楚地表明观点)
Thereareadozenofreasonsbehindmybelief.Firstofall列举,academicstudyingiswhatthecollegestudentsshouldfocuson.Thewholepointofmarriageisthatitimposesclearobligations,notjusttherighttopursueyourownhappiness,buttoprovidebothemotionalandpracticalcareforeachother,whichsurelywastesalotoftime.Moreimportantly列举,mostcollegestudentsarerelyingontheirparents’financialsupporttocontinuetheirstudy.Surely,theirparentshopetheycanconcentrateontheirstudiesratherontheirloveaffairs.Mostimportantofall,列举agreatmajorityofcollegestudentsarestillyoung,thatis,theyhavenotyetdevelopedasoundopinionastothetrueimplicationofloveandmarriage,thereby,mostoftheirmarriagesmayendupindivorce.
Fromwhatwediscussedabove(不如换成basedontheabovementioned),wecansafelycometotheconclusionthatitisunwisetoallowcollegestudentstogetmarried.(结论,不能是对上面已经表达的观点的完全重复,而应该是同义表达,完善和纠偏)Theycan’taffordtime,moneyandenergy.Rulesandregulationsshouldbemadetostopthecollegestudentsfromgettingmarried.(措施,,有观点,有措施)
看图作文
1.要认真研读和分析图表,务求找出规律性的东西,本质的东西
(先概括图表内容,然后从现象中得出结论,)
2.不要大篇幅描述细节,简明扼要,要抓住实质。
3.围绕出题提示或提纲展开,不要额外扩充太多,不要随意自由发挥。
4.多套用相关表达。
Itcanbeseenfromthegraph(chart,picture,etc),
thegraphshowsthat...
Healthgainsindevelopingcountries
1.以附图为依据描述发展中国家的期望寿命lifeexpectancy和婴儿死亡率的变化情况,
2,说明引起变化的原因
Healthgainsindevelopingcountries
Itcanbeseenclearlyfromthegraphthatbothlifeexpectancyandmortalityrateexperiencedsurprisingchangeindevelopingcountriesfrom1960to1990.(概括图表主旨,抓住实质)。
in1960,theaveragelifeexpectancywasonly40,andtheinfantrymortalitywasashighas200per1,000.However,in1990,theaveragelifeexpectancyreached60yearsandtheinfantrymortalitywasaslowas100per1,000.(描述图标所反映的现象作为佐证)Apparently,thisisatremendousdifference.(简评)andwhathascausedit?
(过渡,引出下文)
Inmyopinion,thechangeinlifeexpectancyandinfantmortalityindevelopingcountrieshasthreereasons.(总体分析)Firstofall,列举theimprovementoflifestandardmakesthispossible.Withtheimprovementoflivingconditionsandnutritionalsupplies,peopleinthedevelopingcountrieshadlongerandlongerlifeandtheinfantmortalityalsoincreasedgreatly.Second,列举therehadbeenabigimprovementinmedicineandmedicarefrom1960to1990,fromwhichpeoplebenefitedmost.Intheend,列举(注意不宜过多,注意词语一致)thecomparativepeacefulenvironmentalsomadepeoplehavelongerlifeexpectancyandlowerinfantmortality.
Allinall,peopleintheworldwillenjoyabetterlifeinthefuture(结语).ifwecantakeeffectivemeasuresforourownbenefits.
TheIncreaseintheNumberofChineseTravelingAbroad”.
1.StatethechangesinthenumberofChinesetravelingabroadinthepastthreeyears.
2.Givepossiblereasonsforthechanges.
参考范文
Ascanbeclearlyobservedfromthechartabove,thetrendofChinesetravelingabroadisrocketingtheseyears.(总体结论)Inthepastthreeyears,thenumber(理由)ofChinesetravelingabroadhasbeenonasteadyrise.Accordingtothechart,图表分析thenumberincreasedfrom7.5millionin1999to10millionin2000andto12.1millionin2001.Ithinkthereareatleastthreereasonsfortheabove-mentionedchangesasfollows.(启)
Firstandforemost,thechangesareprimarilyduetothebetterincomeoftheChinese.Theyarebetteroffandcanaffordatripabroad.What’smore,therehavealottodowiththedevelopmentofthetravelindustryinChina.Moreandmoretravelagenciesareattractingmorepeopletojoinintheirtoursabroad.Finally,itiscloselyrelatedtoourpolicyofopeninguptotheoutsideworld.
Fromwhathasbeendiscussed,itisobviousthat句型theincreaseinthenumberofChinesetravelingabroadisofgr
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