2初中英语写作技巧指导[1].ppt
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2初中英语写作技巧指导[1].ppt
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初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导,brainstorm,Teenagerscolorfullife,Westudy.,Welikelisteningtomusic.,Weplaycomputergamesforlong.,Welikereadingbooks.,WeoftenplaySports.,WegotoKFC.,Sometimeswetravel.,Sometimeswestayupstudying.,Teenagershealthylife,Westudyallday.,Welikelisteningtomusic.,Weplaycomputergamesforlong.,Welikereadingbooks.,WeoftenplaySports.,WegotoKFC.,Sometimeswetravel.,Sometimeswestayupstudying.,colorful,healthy,认真审题,找出文章要表达的中心。
写作第一步,审,健康很重要。
在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天,会休息的人才会有健康的身体。
人们是如何度过假期的呢?
国际健康组织对此作了一次调查,右图是他们此次的调查结果。
根据你所得的信息,请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。
审,travel,stayathome,visitfriendsorparents,work,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。
列,写作第二步,根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点,如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲,stayathome,work,visitfriendsorparents,travel,Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.,列,Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?
Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.,Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,anicehead,anicetail,anicebody,加,加首尾,使结构完整。
可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构,开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁,漂亮。
写作第三步:
321465,Second,weshouldkeepquietinthelibrary.First,wehavetowearouruniformstogotoschool,thoughmostofusdontlikethematall.Everyschoolhasitsownrulesforstudents.Wehavemanyschoolrulestofollowinourdailylife.Whatsmore,weoughttoreturnbooksontime.Ourschoolrulesaregoodforus,Iwilltrymybesttofollowthem.Third,wemustdolotsofhomework.,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?
Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Thepeoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,连,恰当运用关联词句,使得文章层次清晰,各个部分衔接自然。
写作第四步:
1.表示并列或递进:
and,aswellas,bothand,notonlybutalso,neithernor;2.表示选择:
or,eitheror;3.表示转折:
but,however,although,though,afterall,4.表示因果:
because,so,therefore5.表示条件:
if,unless6.表示对比:
instead,notbut,ontheonehandontheotherhand;7.表示解释:
forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords;8.表示顺序:
tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend;9.表示强调:
also,besides,whatsmore,actually,infact,10.表示结论:
allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,关联词,Letsplaythegame.,_Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidntgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert_.Welikedoingkindsofsports_swimming,runningandhiking._,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._,hewentback._,hesmiled.,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?
Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,连,Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,美,美,选好词句,美化文章。
在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。
写作第五步:
SkillOneMakeyoursentencescorrect,Goodgoodstudy,daydayup.Weshoulddosportsaweekonce.Savetheenvironmentisourduty.Thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday.IhopeIcancometruemydream.,onceaweek,Saving,be,achieve,SkillTwoExpressindifferentways,Ourparentsreallywishustoworkhard.Ourparentsreallywishustoputourheartintostudy.Theteenagerslikethecomputers.Theteenagersarefondofthecomputers.Weshouldnteatjunkfood.Weshouldstayawayfromthejunkfood.Whenhespoke,hegotmoreexcited.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhegot.WeshouldlearnEnglishgrammar.ItsimportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.,书面表达写作技巧,审,列,加,连,美,中考作文评分标准,第一档(13-15分)信息完整,表达流畅,无语言错误或基本无语言错误。
第二档(10-12分)信息基本完整,表达较流畅,有少量语言错误,但不影响意思表达。
第三档(7-9分)能传达部分信息,表达不够流畅,语言错误较多,但句子基本可读。
第四档(4-6分)只能传达少量信息,表达不流畅,语言错误多,只有少量句子可读。
第五档(1-3分)只能传达个别信息,表达不清楚,只有个别句子可读。
书面表达,以“Ihaveadream”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。
Sentencepatternsforreference(以下句型供参考)Mydreamistobe/todo/togoIenjoy/like/preferTomakemydreamcometrue,IIfmydreamcomestrue,IhaveadreamHaveyoueverwatchedabikeracing?
Theridersarecool!
Yeah,itsmydreamtobeaprofessionalbikerider.IfellinlovewithbikeriderforthefirsttimeIrode.Sincethat,Ivebeenridingfor5years.Somepeoplethinkitsdangerous,Idontthinkso.Duringabikeriding,youwillbeinahighspeedandfeelthewindrushesquickly.Exciting?
Thatis!
Tomakemydreamcometrue,Illpracticemoreaftermiddleschool.Also,Illwatchmorebikeracingtolearnfromtheriders.Ihopemydreamwillcometrue,ifso,IcanenjoythelifeIlikebest.,PassageOne,IhaveadreamAnybodyhasadream.Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentdreams.Mostpeoplealwaysdreamtobepopularorrich.Butmydreamisveryspecial,Ijustwanttobeabird.WhyIhavesuchadream?
JustbecauseIadmiretheyrefree,theycandoeverythingtheywant.Whentheyreflyinginthesky,theylookbeautiful,eventheyrethemostbeautifulanimals.Ireallywanttoenjoythefeelingofflyinginthesky.However,Iknowitwontbeachievedanymore.Itsjustadream,inmyheart.,PassageTwo,PassageThree,IhaveadreamMydreamistobeabasketballplayer.IlikeitbecauseIthinkitveryinteresting.Itcanmakemebecomeveryhappyandhealthy.Tomakemedreamcometrue.Ineedtrytodoit.AndIneedtakesometimetodoit.Ineedpracticeeveryday.Ifmydreamcometrue,Iwillmorethytodoit.,Homework,自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑1500米后,校园里课间可以看到很多学生跑步的身影。
对于这样的倡议,你在学校做了一个调查,有些学生觉的好,有些学生觉的不好。
请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文,并谈谈自己的看法,发表在学校的刊物上,开头已经写好。
Ididasurveyaboutwhethermiddleschoolstudentsshouldrun1500meterseveryday.Herearetheresults.,Thankyou!
Allofushaveholidaysinourdailylife,buthowdopeoplespendtheirholiday?
Wedidasurveyandherearetheresults.fromCaiPiaoli,Itsnothingbetterthanhavingarestafterworking!
Sohowdopeoplerestthemselvesonvacation?
Accordingtooursurvey,thereareseveralways.fromZhangShiyi,Allinall,differentpeoplehavedifferentwaystorelaxthemselves.ButIsuggestthatweshouldenjoytheholiday,thenwemayworkbetter.fromLiuMiao,Sothisyear,whynotconsidergoingoutside?
Spendyourhealthyholidayandthengetmoreenergyforworkorstudy.fromWuYou,
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