高考英语读后续写高分大招:三大步八小步速成作文法.docx
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高考英语读后续写高分大招:
三大步,八小步速成作文法
【一三大步】
三步的核心即:
审题构思润色
审题:
审人称时态情节结构衔接
构思:
组织材料。
围绕全文思想展开情节构思,但要与所给各段落开头语衔接合理。
润色:
本着语言形象生动的原则,把构思句子进行修改,使得行文流畅,逻辑合理,语法正确,可以使用无灵主语句。
避免句式单一,可以灵活使用高级句型,非谓语短语,独立主格结构,从句。
过渡词如What’smore,notonly...butalso,personally等。
最后,务必整洁地写在答题卡上。
【二八小步】
l情绪:
消极情绪
l细节:
进一步解释描写
l转折:
个人的努力或借助外界
l转机:
事情似乎有了转机,并抱有希望,感到欣慰
l失望:
但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
l新法:
突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)
l结局:
过了一段时间;事情有了最后的转折
l总结:
点题,呼应前文
读后续写,大部分都是围绕conflict,solution来运转的。
大部分文章都是这个模式:
【三高考真题典例剖析】
第1步情绪:
情绪描写
第2步细节:
进一步解释描写
情细节描写∶笑绪描写∶笑
smilebrightly;laugh;beam;light(sth)up;lightupwith;burstintolaughter;burstoutlaughing;wearabright/broadsmile;givesbasmile
看到直升飞机,Jane高兴地笑了起来。
(1)Atthesightofthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.
(2)Seeingthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.
(3)Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,Jane'seyes/facelitupwithdelight.
情绪描写∶哭
cry;sob;weep;burstintotears;burstoutcrying;(one'seyes)brimwith/befullof/befilledwithtears
细节描写∶哭
(1)Hiseyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.他泪眼模糊。
(2)Hereyeswereredfromcrying.她的双眼哭得通红。
(3)Heisclosedtotears.他快要哭了。
(4)Tearsrolleddown/coursed/trickled/streamedhercheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。
情绪描写∶害怕
frightened;panicked;scared;speechless;in(a)panic;inacoldsweat;befulloffear;befilledwithterror;berootedtothespot;freeze;runaway;flee;one'skneesfeelweak;(hands)sweat
细节描写∶害怕
我感到很害怕。
(1)Ifeltveryfrightened/scared/panicked.
(2)Iwasin(a)panic/wasfulloffear.
(3)Istoodrootedtothespot,brimmingwithfear/filledwithfear.
(4)Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.
(5)Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.
(6)Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror;mypalmssweating.
情绪描写∶高兴激动
v.dance;jump/leapwithjoy;feelasurgeofhappiness/delight/joy/excitement;whistle;beovercomewithhappiness/delight/joy/excitement;(one'seyes)twinkle;(one'sheart)beat/poundwildly
adj.happy;delighted;overjoyed;excited;thrilled;wildwithjoy
细节描写∶高兴激动
当她知道考试结果时,她兴奋极了。
(1)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,shefeltexcited/thrilled.
(2)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.
(3)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,herheartwaspoundingwithwildjoy.
(4))Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,awildexcitementtookholdofher.
(5)Knowingtheresultofthetest,shefeltasurgeofexcitement.
(6)Knowingtheresultofthetest,shewasovercomewithexcitement.
情绪描写∶伤心痛苦
sad;bitter;sorrowful;feelasurgeofsadness;(sadness)surgewithinsb;one'sheartache;beovercomewithsadness
细节描写∶伤心痛苦她伤心不已。
(1)Samfeltextremelysad.
(2)Asadnesscameoverher.
(3)Herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.
(4)Numbwithgrief,shebecamespeechless.
(5)Feelingasurgeofsadness,shecouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.
(6)Sadnesssurgingwithinher,sheburstintotears.
情绪描写∶生气愤怒
felt/getangry/furious;feelasurgeofanger/rage/fury;eyesblaze;stormoutof/into/off;storm/sayangrily;sthmakessbbloodboil;sthmakessbextremelyangry;claspone'sfists/teeth;speechless
细节描写∶生气愤怒
Sam感到非常生气。
(1)Samfeltveryangry.
(2)Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.
(3)Samfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoor
furiouslybehindhim.
(4)Boilingwithrage,Samshookhisfistatme.
(5)Filledwithfury,Samwasunabletoutterasingleword.
第3步转折:
个人努力或借助外界(由“负”变“正”)
鼓起勇气;他人的鼓励
Pluckup/take/gatherone'scourage(todo….)
毫不犹豫
(1)sbcouldhardlywaittodosth
(2)withoutasecondthought
(3)withouteventhinking
(4)withoutdelay
(5)withouthesitation
_典例分析_
费尔法克斯先生深夜开车回家,途中又累又困,于是违章停车,想休息一下,结果被警察逮住,接下来怎么写呢?
Mr.Fairfaxloweredhisheadwithasigh,readyforaticket.(费尔法克斯先生叹了口气,低下头,准备接受罚款。
)Unexpectedly,thepoliceadded,“ButI’llfigureoutsomeplaceforyouhaveagoodrestthough.”(出乎意料的是,警方补充说,“不过我想给你找个地方好好休息。
”)Wildwithjoy,Fairfaxacceptedhisofferwithouthesitation,followinghimtodrivehiscartosomewherewarm(费尔法克斯毫不犹豫地接受了他的提议,跟着他开车到温暖的地方。
)
这个例子属于“负”变“正”的模式。
主人公由开始的“焦虑”,原以为会被警察罚款,最后变“感动”:
警察帮他找到温暖的地方。
第4步转机:
事情似乎有了转机,并抱有希望,感到欣慰
似乎
(1)Itwaslikedoingsth
(2)Itseemedasif/that
希望
(1)hopingthat..
(2)see/feelaglimmerofhope
(3)tryinghardtodosth
欣慰
(1)…..breathedasighofrelief-sighedwithrelief松了—口气
(2)(awaveofrelieffloodedthrough/washedoversb
(3)toone'srelief…使人欣慰的/放心的是……
第5步失望:
但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题(由“正”变“负”)
不幸的是
(1)butbadluckforsb,.….
(2),butinvain
(3),butwithoutsuccess(4),butnouse
不知道做什么
(1)sbdidsth,wonderingwhattodonext.
(2)sbdidsth,notknowingwhattodonext.
(3)sbdidsth,unsureofwhattodonext.(4)sbwasatalosswhattodo.
(5)sbwasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.
_典例分析_
感谢好心人:
故事中,主人公的戒指被清洁工捡到后,物归原主,想要感谢这位好心人。
你怎么继续描写。
Iexpressedmygratitudeandpromisedhimawell-preparedgiftforthanks.(我表达了感激之情,并答应给他一份精心准备的礼物,以表示感谢。
)However,heimmediatelyrefusedandhungupthephone.(然而,他立刻拒绝了,挂断了电话。
)这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。
想要感谢清洁工,属于“正向”,但是对方拒绝了,变成了“负向”。
这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。
想要感谢清洁工,属于“正向”,但是对方拒绝了,变成了“负向”。
第6步想法:
突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)
某人想到/明白/有了主意
(1)Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat+从句
(2)Ithitsbthat+从句
(3)Itstrucksbthat+从句
(4)Itdawnedonsbthat+从句
(5)(idea,thought..)occurred/cametosb
(6)..came/flashedintoone'smind-...crowdedinone'smind
(7)one'smindbegantorace
第7步结局:
过段时间,事情有了最后的转折
过了一段时间
(1)notlongafterthat,..=shortlyafterwards,….beforelong,….=It
didn'ttakelongbefore+从句=Ittooksometimebefore+从句
(2)foraninstant/moment
事情有了转折
(1)Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat+从句
(2)Butonsecondthoughts,….
(3)Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.
第8步总结:
点题,呼应前文主旨升华
直到……才意识到
(1)倒装句∶Notuntil+时间状语+didsbrealize/noticethat+
从句
(2)强调句∶Itwasonly+时间状语+thatsbrealizedthat+从句
还记得某人的话;还在某人的脑海中
(1)One'swords(echoed/rangout)inone'sears.
(2)One'swords/voice/songlingered/whisperedinone'smind/head.
(3)One'sheadwasstillfullof..
经历与教训
(1)Whata/anvaluable/useful/great/painfullessonsbtaught
me/sblearnedfromsb!
(2)Whata/anenjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/
memorable/interesting/valuableexperiencesbhad!
(3)Downdeepinone'sheat….在某人的内心深处
第二部分“八步法”实战应用:
高考真题讲解
_典例分析1_
故事梗概:
父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活,见父亲和叔叔骑马,儿子也很想骑,于是亲身上马体验。
临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路("Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!
")。
一路上,风景优美,让人陶醉。
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.
WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.
HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.
Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!
""OK!
"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.
Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.
注意:
(1)所续写短文的词数应为l50左右;
(2)续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
Paragraph1:
Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.
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Paragraph2:
Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.
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Paragraph1:
Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.
八步法思路
1.Awaveofnervousnesssweptovermeespeciallywhenthehorseranlikecrazy.
(情绪)
2.Myheartpoundingandmypalmssweating,aninnervoicetoldmethatIhadtocalmdown.
(细节详述)
3.Thoughinapanic,Ipluckedmycouragetopullonthereigns.
(转折:
个人努力)
4.Luckily,itdidn’ttakelongbeforeIsettleddownthehorse.
(转机:
成功,希望来了)
5.Justatthatmoment,Dadranover,gaspingforair.
(衔接句:
新问题来了)
6.“Boy,wearewayoffthetrack.”Hesaidseriously,alookofconcernspreadingacrosshisface.
Paragraph2:
Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.
1.Hungryandfrustrated,wetriedtofindawayoutbutinvain.
(努力,失败)
2.Itsuddenlydawnedonmewecouldrodedowntherivernearby.
(突然有了办法)
3.Unexpectedly,theriverbroughtustothefamiliartrackatlast.
(开始做)
4.Afterwhatseemedtwohours,UnclePaul’sfarmhousedidcomeintosight.
(成功了)
5.Myfather’sfacebrightenedup,sodidmine.
(感受)
6.Uponourarrival,UnclePaulcouldn’twaittoaskedus,“Wherehaveyoubeen?
Iamjustcalling911.”
(幽默对话)
7.“ToAlice’sWonderland”myfatheranswered,winkingatmewithabiggrin.
8.Whatanunforgettableexperiencewehad!
_典例分析2_
故事梗概:
夫妻旅游途中吵架,妻子独自离开,述路在树林里,直升飞机来了几次授救但没有看见她。
她感到很失望。
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个
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