六级高分写作讲义.docx
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六级高分写作讲义
附录写作练习答案
二、写作常见错误分析
一、语法错误
(一)句子结构错误
1.主从句叠置
1)Therearemoreandmorestudentswholiketousethecomputer./Moreandmorestudentsliketousethecomputer.
2)Therearestillmanyproblemsthatshouldbenotedandresolved./Manyproblemsstillshouldbenotedandresolved.
2.简单句叠置
Ilikechattingonlineverymuch,soIgotothenetbaralmosteveryweekend./Ilikechattingonlineverymuch.Igotothenetbaralmosteveryweekend.
3.从句叠置
Itisknowntoallthatcomputersplayanimportantroleinmanyfieldsofourlife./Asisknowntoall,computersplayanimportantroleinmanyfieldsofourlife.
4.句子成分缺失
Ifweworkhard,wewillsurelybesuccessful./Workinghard,wewillsurelybesuccessful.
5.语序错误
1)Whydocollegestudentsspendmoreandmoretimeonthecomputer?
1)Ioftenwonderwheretheyhavegottheirmoney.
(二)动词形式错误
1.时态错误
ManypeoplethinkthattheInternetwillbemoreusefulinthefuture.
2.语态形式错误
1)Ihavebeenexcitedseveraldaysatthenewsthatyouwillcomehere.
2)Mostofthestudentsaresatisfiedwiththeserviceinthedininghall.
3.单复数形式错误
1)Wisemenseekopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem./Awisemanseeksopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem.
2)Somepeopleareafraidthatcomputersmaycontrolmeninthefuture.
4.非谓语动词形式错误
1)Letmesay“hello”toyouonbehalfofeveryone.
2)Doingexerciseinthemorningisgoodforone’shealth.
3)Havingstudiedinourschoolfor3years,Ifindthatthecanteenservicehaschangedalot.
(三)代词错误
1)Wecanusecomputersindoingeverythingwelike.
2)Acollegestudentshouldbeabletodohiswashingonhisown.
(四)冠词错误
1)A/Thehorseisausefulanimal.
2)TheexamwillbeheldinDecember,2004.
(五)词性错误
1)Iwishyoucanconsidermysuggestions.
2)Ifapersonwantstosucceed,hemustlearntoenduresufferingsandsetbacks.
二、用词错误
1)Studentsmustknowhowtooperateacomputer./Studentsmustknowhowtoworkonacomputer.
2)PeoplecanbeexposedtomanynewthingsontheInternet./PeoplecanlearnmanynewthingsontheInternet.
3)Thepurposeofthisletteristoexpresssomeopinionsontheserviceinthedininghall./Thepurposeofthisletteristomakesomecomplaintsabouttheserviceinthedininghall.
三、表达习惯错误
1)Whatgeneratedsolargeachange?
/Whyistheresolargeachange?
2)Now6000yuanisenoughforyoutobuyaP4computer./NowyoucanbuyaP4computerfor6000yuan.
3)Inaroomoftenlive6-8students.
4)Ithinktherearethreereasonsforthisgreatchange.
5)Thepricesofthefoodaretoohigh./Thefoodistooexpensive.
6)Thereasonforthisisthatsomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard./Thisisbecausesomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard.
四、标点符号及大小写错误
1)However,everycoinhastwosides.Ithinkthesurroundingsinourcanteenarethebestamongalluniversities.
2)Themanwasracingdownthestreetbecausehewaslatefortheclass.
3)AtlastIwanttoletyouknowthatIloveouruniversityverymuch.
4)Myfavoritesportsareswimming,jogging,mountaineeringandplayingtabletennis.
5)ThebestEnglishfilminmyeyesisForrestGump.
五、冠词用法讲练
EXERCISE1
A.1.a2.an
3.an4.an
5.an6.an
7.a8.an
B.1.anewofficebuilding2.travelagent
3.anAmericanscientist4.aday’souting
5.anIndianstamp6.aheartattack
7.anadvancedcountry8.aninterestingplay
EXERCISE2
1.A(telephone);a2.x;x;x
3.a;a;an;a4.a;a;a;an
5.a;a;a;a;a6.an;a;x;an;x;a;a
7.a;an8.x
EXERCISE3
A.1.a(verybadnight);a(wink)
2.an(honesty)
3.a(visionofanewandhappierEurope)
4.a(holiday);a(dayoff);a(month)
5.an(hourlyservice)
6.a(greathonour);a(gathering)
7.a(mountain);a(horror)
8.an(earlyage)
9.a(word)
10.a(boy)
B.1.a(bigproblem);(nottoobig)a(problem)
2.a(squarenose);(sohandsome)a(man)
3.(Howevergreat)a(disaster)
4.(Many)a(shipwreckedsailor)
5.(Such)an(urgentneed)
6.(Sourgent)a(need)
7.(aslovely)a(picture)
8.(what)a(seriouscrisis)
9.(many)a(greaterman)
10.(Howserious)a(crime)
EXERCISE4
1.the;x2.x;The(forests)
3.x;The(nature)4.The(education);x
7.x;the8.the;x
EXERCISE5
A.1.x;a;the2.The(steam-engine);the
3.The(bat);a4.x;the;x;a
5.the6.a;the;x;x
7.The(prison);a8.The(youngest);x;the;x
B.1.The(horse);a(nobleanimal);a(faithfulservant)
2.a(game)
3.the(school);the(behaviour);the(pupils)
4.The(dinner);the(speeches)
5.the(settingofgoals)
6.the(hospital);(at)the(endof)the(week)
7.the(radio)
8.The(flute)
9.(have)a;the(citycenter);(get)a;(on)the(bus)
10.the(ground);the(wood)
EXERCISE6
A.1.The;the;the2.The;the
3.The;the4.The(wool);the
5.x;the;x6.the;the;the;x
7.the;the8.x;x;x
9.the;the10.x
B.1.theBritishMuseum2.theSuezCanal
3.thedifferencebetween4.theWilsons
thesetwowords
5.inthefirstrow6.theyear1949
EXERCISE7
(The)Peopleeverywhere…When(the)strangers…(The)Goodmanners…in(the)differentparts…accepting(the)gifts…shows(the)badmanners…even(the)rudeness…with(the)goodmannersaccept(the)importantthingswith(the)bothhands…toaccept(the)importantthingsshowsnotonly(the)discourtesy…In(the)Europeand(the)NorthAmerica,however,(the)people…
六、标点符号用法讲练
EXERCISE1
1.The…identity:
Lt,HenryBedell,CompanyD,11thVermontVolunteers…old.
2.It…thatDad…already-farming80acres…job.
3.NowI’m…point-butwhat…there?
4.Rain,snow,sleet,fog…world.
5.During…tourists;duringthewinter…beach.
6.To…extent,mankind…earth.
7.Like…wildlife,…reproduce,grow…fall.
8.The…JimThorpe,thegreatestAmerican…times.
9.The…enormous,juicy…appetizing.
10.I…kids-educated…theWest…movies-wouldbedisappointed.
11.I…statue.Itssoul,sotospeak,is…beauty.
12.The…students,teachers,doctors,businessmen,factoryworkers-people…life.
13.Is…underground-innew…caves?
14.I…-bycorrespondence-thatI…heratBeijingHotel…Thursday.
15.Passengers…beverages:
coffee,tea,milkorsoda.
16.Present…Mr.Ho,Chairman…EnglishDepartment;Mr.Brown,avisiting…Denmark;and…us.
17.The…patients;it…of“defensivemedicine”.
18.His…withthem-hehad…oncemade…help.
EXERCISE2
1….work,for…
2….down;asaresult,we…
3….note;it…
4….watch,yet…
5…..tired,so…
6.…booming;consequently,thecompany…
7.…init,anditwas…
8.…looking;thefood,however,is…
9….compulsory;thestudents…choice,therefore
10…coffee;others…
11…costly;nevertheless,we…
12…weightlessness;moreover,they…
EXERCISE3
1.…death;…
2.…sunlight.We…/…sunlight;we…
3.…May,yet/butsnow…
4.…years;forexample,…
5.…quiet;…
6.…night;I…/….night,and/soI…
7.…punished;infact…/…punished.Infact…
8.…food,andso…./food;therefore,I….
9.…very;what…./…vary.What…
10.…TV;Marie…/…TV,andMarie…
EXERCISE4
1.“OnFriday,”theteacherannounced,“we’lltakeupanewlesson.”
2.“What,”heasked,“dowehavetoprepareforthecampingtrip?
”
3.C
4.Hegreetseveryonewith“Hi!
”
5.“YoumaythinkIhavealotofgarbageinthesebags,”oneshopping-bagladyvolunteeredinachurchsoupkitchen,“butit’severythingIneed.”
6.C
7.“Itpainsme,”Isaid,“tofindthatyoubothhavebeenpanhandlingsolongthatitnolongerembarrassesyou.”
8.Retirementoftenbringsmanyproblemssurroundingthe“WhatdoIdowithmyself?
”question,eventhoughtheremaybenofinancialworries.
EXERCISE5
1.Atoneo’clockonSeptember2,1666,theGreatFireofLondonstartedinsideabaker’sshopinPuddingLane.Itlastedfivedays,andnearly80%ofallthebuildingswithintheLondonWallwererazed.Accordingtotheofficialreport,13,200houses,87parishchurches,over400streets,andtheenormousoldSt.Paul’sCathedral-oneofthewondersofthemedievalworld-wereinruins.OutofLondon’s450acres,only75remaineduntouched.
RobertHubert,aFrenchwatchmakerfromRouen,wasaccusedofthefire.Thesentencesaidhe“haddeliberatelystartedthefire”.Afterhewashanged,itwasconclusivelyprovedthathehadnotevenarrivedinLondonuntiltwodaysafterthefirebrokeout.
2.Mr.Joneswasveryfondofclimbingmountains,sooneyearhewenttoSwitzerlandforhisholidays.Afterhehadclimbedsomeeasymountains,hedecidedonedaytoclimbamoredifficultone;buthedidnotwanttogoupitalone,sohefoundagoodSwissguide,whohadoftenclimbedthatmountain.
Atfirstitwasnotadifficultclimb,butthentheycametoaplacewhichwasnotsoeasy.Theguidestopped,turnedroundandwarnedMrJones.“Becarefulhere,”hesaid“Thisisadangerousplace.Youcaneasilyfall,andifyoudo,youwillfallstraightdownaverylongway.”“But,”hecontinuedcalmly,“ifyoudofallhere,don’tforgettolooktotherightwhileyouaregoingdown.Thereisaquiteextraordinarilybeautifulviewthere-muchmorebeautifulthantheoneyoucanseefromhere.”
3.Itisthesimplethingsthatreallymatter.Ifamandelightsinhiswifeandchildren,hassuccessinwork,andfindspleasureinthealternationofdayandnight,springandautumn,hewillbehappywhateverhisphilosophymaybe.If,ontheotherhand,hefindshiswifehateful,hischildren’snoiseunendurable,andtheofficeanightmare,ifinthedaytimehelongsfornight,andatnighthesighsforthelightofday-thenwhatheneedsisnotanewphilosophybutanewpatternoflife-adifferentdi
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