大学英语四级写作堂上笔记Word格式文档下载.docx
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55handinginAnswerSheet1(writingandspeedreading)
●10:
00-10:
35Listening(35points)
35-11:
20
●ComprehensiveReading(25points),
●Cloze(10points)
●andTranslation(5points)
●11:
20handinginAnswerSheet2
OralEnglishexam:
●IfyourfinalscoreonDec.22ndismorethan550,youarequalifiedtotakepartintheCET4OralEnglishExaminNextMay.
●Requirements:
●1.Wordlimit:
about120words.
●2.Genre:
anessaybasedonafixedoutline,withyourviewpoint/comments,andfacts/examples.
●3.Assessment:
seetheevaluationform
●4.Suggestionforyou:
tofocusonupdatednewsandhottopics,andtohaveacriticalmind.
评分标准:
●14分——切题。
表达思想清楚,文字通顺、连贯。
基本无语言错误,但有个别小错误。
●11分——切题。
表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
●8分——基本切题。
有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;
语言错误较多,其中有些是严重错误。
●5分——基本切题。
表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。
有相当多的语言错误。
●2分——条理不清,思路混乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子有错误,且多数为严重错误。
●0分——白卷、作文与题目毫不相关、或只有几个孤立的词二无法表达思想。
●四级写作自2002.6以后要求不少于120词,字数不足会酌情扣分,
注意:
●1.题目中给出主题句,起始句,结束句,均不得计入所写字数。
●2.题目要求写三段的作文,只写一段得0-4分;
只写两段得0-9分.
2007.6四级真题
●Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanannouncementtowelcomestudentstojoinaclub.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
●1)社团活动的主要内容;
●2)参加社团活动的好处;
●3)如何加入社团;
5分作文
Dearfriends,wewanttoincreaseourEnglishclub,wehopemorestudentstotakepartin.ifyoutakepartinourclub,youwillhavemanygoods.First,youwillraiseEnglishverysoon.Second,youcanhavechancestotalkingwithforeigners,too.Third,youcanstudymanyforeignknowledges.Forth,makemanyforeignfriends.Andsoon.(内容不符)
Ourclubisaverywonderfulclub.Ifyoutakepartin,youwilllikeitverymuch.Ifyounot,Ithinkyoumustregret.Socometousnow.wearewaitingforyouallthetime!
(空洞)
Thewayoftakingpartinisverysimple:
telephone.Ourtelephonenumberis62514479.
8分作文
WelcometoourEnglishclub!
Wepreparemanywonderfulactivitiesforyou.WehaveEnglishcornerseveryweekend.AndwepreparetwoEnglishfilmseveryweek.Sometimesweinviteexpertstogivespeech(speeches)for(to)you.Andwealsopreparepartiesordebatessometimes.
Youwillgetmanyinterestsbyjoiningourclub.First,youcanrise(raise)yourEnglishlevelgreatly.Second,youcanstudy(learn)moreforeignknowledgeandbroadenyourviews.Third,youcanmakemanynewfriendsandmakeyourcollegelifemorecolorful(yourcollegelifewillbecomemorecolorful).
IfyouareinterestedinEnglishlearning,Ihopeyoucometojoinussoon.Youcancallusorsendemailtous.Ourtelephonenumberis62514479,andouremailaddressisengishclub@.Youarelookedforwardtojoin(Wearelookingforwardtoyourjoining)!
11分作文
Wepreparemanywonderfulactivitiesforyou.WehaveEnglishcornerseveryweekendforyoutopracticeyouroralEnglish.[1]AndeveryWednesdayyoucanhavetheopportunitytowatchtwoEnglishfilms.[连接词]Inaddition,[2]sometimesEnglishexpertswillbeinvitedtogivelectures.[连接词]Besides,[3]weoftenorganizedebates,partiesandothergatherings.
Youwillgetmanybenefitsfromjoiningourclub.[连接词]Atfirst,youcanimproveyourEnglishlevel(ability)greatly.[连接词]Moreover,youcanlearnmoreforeigncultures[4]bycommunicatingwithothersandconsultingexperts.[连接词]Inaddition,youcanmakemanynewfriendsandyourcollegelifewillbemademorecolorful.
IfyouareinterestedinEnglishlearning,[6]cometojoinussoon.[7]Youcancallusat62514479,oremailusatenglishclub@.Lookingforwardtoyou(your)joining!
14分作文
ItissponsoredbytheStudentUnionandhasbeensetupforthreeyears.Manywonderfulactivitiesareorganizedandarrangedinourclub.WehaveEnglishcornerseveryweekend,[1]withsomeknowledgeableforeignteachers.AndeveryWednesdayyoucan[2]enjoytwoclassicalEnglishfilms[3]forfree.Inaddition,expertsonEnglishlearningandculturewillbeinvitedtogivelectures[4]onoccasion.Besides,weoftenorganizedebates,partiesandothergatheringstoprovidechancesforyoutoexchangeideas.
[5]Alltheseactivitiesare[6]quitebeneficialtobothyourstudyandlife.[7]NotonlycantheyhelpyouimproveyourEnglish,butalsoenrichyourcollegelifegreatly.Moreover,bycommunicatingwithothersandconsultingexperts,youcanlearnmoreforeignculturesandbroadenyourviews.[8]Andofcourse,hereyoucanmakemanynewfriends.
AnyonewhoisinterestedinEnglishlearningiswelcomedwarmly.[9]Whatyouneeddois[10]justcallusat62514479,oremailusatengishclub@.Lookingforwardtoyourbecomingoneofussoon!
高分作文标准
●卷面整洁,字数适当;
●内容切题,结构完整;
(8分)
●表达清楚;
语法正确;
(11分)
●句式多变,文字流畅。
(14分)
掌握基本语法、造正确句子
●把句子写对:
完整、一致、简洁
●把句子写长:
扩充、解释
简单句
●主语(S)+谓语(Vi)
●主语(S)+谓语(Vt)+宾语(O)
●主语(S)+谓语(Vt)+宾语(O2)+宾语(O1)
●主语(S)+谓语(Vt)+宾语(O)+宾补(OC)
●主语(S)+系动词(LV)+表语(SC)
非谓语形式
●Learningaforeignlanguageisagoodwaytowidenstudents’eye-vision.
●Ourresponsibilityisconservinghistoricrelicsandheritage.
●Iamlookingforwardtomeetingyousooninmyhometown.
●Whenyougetinsomnia,sleepingpillsarethebestchoiceforyou.
●Itisharmfulforsmallchildrentohavetoshouldertheburdenofthemuchschoolwork.
●Wouldyouallowmetohaveachancetodiscussthisthornymatterwithyou?
●Thegovernment’sobligationistoimprovepeople’slivingstandard.
形容词性从句–定语从句
SentenceCorrection
●1.Wehavetimetocommunicate.Wehavechancestoshowourlovedirectlybytalking.(删去逗号)
●2.Forahealthyperson,theration...(对比:
Asahealthyperson,youwilldosportsregularly.);
diabetesmelitus->
diabetesmellitus
●3.Tosumupbriefly,wehavetokeepthebalancebetweensportsandlife.
●4.Takingexercisecanpromotepositivebloodflow.
●5.Inaddition,doingmoreexercisecanbemorerelaxing.
●6.Onthecontrary,sportsalsohavesomenegativeaspects.
●7.Youmustdoexerciseregularly.
●8.Hesentmetothedrivingschoolfromeighto'
clockinthemorninganddidnotpickmeupuntilhalfpastnineintheevening.
●9.Firstly,parentsshouldlethischildmakedecisionsbyhimself.
●10.Sportscanalsostrengthenpeople'
sbody,heartandmuscles.
●11.What‘smore,theyhavesportsforentertainment.
●12.Atthesametime,excessexercisewillcauseironlosswhichdoesharmtoourhealth.
●13.Therearestillsomeparentswhoarenotindependentenough.Theyhavetorelyontheirfriendstomakegooddecisions.
●14.ThisisthelovestorywhichhappenedbetweenmymotherandI.
●15.Withthedifferentlovestoriesrevealedinyourmind,youwillbe....
●16.Theymaylivetogetherforresponsibility.
●17.Idon'
tknowwhethermyparentsarestillinlovewitheachotherornot.
●18.过于陈旧。
●19.Asweallknow,exercisingisneededinourlife.
●20.Itwillhurtpeople'
shealth,forexample,musclesmaybepulledandironmayrunoffinbodies.
●21.Iwillhurtpeople'
shealth,forexample,musclesmaybepulledandironmayrunout.
●22.Asweknow,sportshavebothpositiveandnegativeeffects.
●23.Sportscanhelpburnsomeextrafatstokeepone'
sgoodshape.
●24.Spolrtspromotehemokinesis,whichwillbeinfavorofstayinghealthy.
●25.Mydadisahumorousandoptimisticperson.Heismyfriendatthesametime.
●26.Mysisterisjustlikemymum.
●27.Wealwaysgoshoppingandhaveahaircuttogether.
●28.Forachild,mom'
scookingis...
●29.Asweallknow,sportsplayanimportantroleinourdailylife.
●30.Onlyifparentsreleasetheirchildrencantheyrealizehowtohelpchildrentobeindependent.
●31.Doingsportsregularlymakesusfeelgood.
●32.Soitisnoteasyforustoconcentrateonourworkandstudy.
●33.Sometimes,sportswillmakeusloseiron.
●34.Aseveryoneknows,sportshavetwoaspects.Oneisthepositiveaspect,andtheotheristhenegativeaspect.(空洞)
●35.Theremustbemanypeoplewhoconsiderthatsportisgoodforpeople'
shealth,andallitseffectsarepositive.
●36.Peopleincitieslackexercisingandtheirbodiesareweak.
●37.Overmuchexercisewilleasilyleadtobeingovertired.
●38.Itisknowntoallofusthatdoingsomesportscouldstrengthenourbody,improvetheimmunesystemorevenpromotethecirculationofblood.
●39.Onthepositiveside,enoughsportscanmakeourbodystrongerandkeepushealthy.
●40.Moderateexerciseshowsevidenceofironloss.
●41.Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplelikesports,becausemostofthemknowsportsarebeneficialforourbodyandsocietygraduallyadvocatesanationwideexercise.
●42.Doingsomesportsisthehealthyandefficientwaytokeepfit.
●43.Sportsneedmuchoxygenintothebody,whichcanacceleratethecirculationoftheblood.
●44.Wecannottalkaboutitwithoutthenegativeaspect.
注意事项:
●1.弄清词性。
●2.每一个完整的句子以句号“.”结尾。
在句号内的这一完整的句子中,必须有且只有一个谓语动词;
若有多个动词,
(1)多个谓语动词用连词连接,
(2)需保留一个动词作为谓语动词,其他动词变v-ing或者v-ed非谓语形式,或以从句形式出现。
●3.句与句之间不可用逗号连接。
●4.弄清楚时态,时态一致。
●5.人称一致。
●Atthattime,evenhiswifehadcried,buthedidn'
tgiveup.
●时态:
应用过去时
●短句间没有转折关系。
哭不代表放弃。
因此,不应用连词but,或者改变句子内容。
●2001.1-2011.12真题作文:
●根据题材分类,校园生活8,读书学习4,日常生活5,社会热点6,
●根据体裁分类:
应用文7,说明文6,议论文7,记叙文3,
●根据写作类型:
现象解释7,信函3,演说辞3,记叙文3,观点论证2,海报2,对比选择1,解决问题2,
Review:
WritingTechniques
●1.causeandeffect
●2.atopic+details
●3.ag
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