写作大小作文练习版本二文档格式.docx
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提出质疑
详实论据
得出结论
B:
化苍白为哲理
哲理引入
具体阐释
孔子
老子
孟子
李子
马子
Idioms600.doc
C:
化平淡为修辞
Displayedbythiscartoonisasimpletruth:
…….However,suchadoctrinehasbeenwavedasidebymostofus.Anycases?
Haven’tyoueverfound….?
Haven’tyouevernoticed….?
Why…?
Why…?
Aren'
tthey…….?
【第三段】
根据上文论调,进行对应评论
1.社会弊病(生态环境)
控制:
外控,内控
Correspondinglawsandregulationsshouldbeputintopracticeto….
Officialinterventionshouldbeactivatedtodirectthisproblemtoapositivesituation.
Finesorpenaltiesshouldbecastonthismattertoputanendtoit.
Mediasupervisionshouldbeputonthismattertoreducetheprevalenceof…..
Self-discipline
Self-restrict
Self-restrain
Self-control
Theabilityofself-disciplineshouldbecultivatedamongthosewho…..
Awarenessof….
Theawarenessof…shouldbenurturedamongthosewho….
Rightattitude…
Rightattitudeto….shouldbeadvocatedamongthosewho….
Socialconvention…
Anewsocialconventionconcerning…shouldbeestablishedamongthosewho……
Howcanweputtheproblemof…undercontrol?
Itoccurstomanythat…….Thatisaway,butapassiveone.Actually,wealsoneedto…,withtheassistanceofwhichwecanfundamentallyputthistrendtoanend.
Suchmisconductsof…mustbeputundercontrolimmediately!
Buthow?
Suggestionsfromthegeneralpublicinvolve…,…,and…Theseproposalshavebeenputintopracticeforyears,withfruitfulrewards.Isthatenough?
Actually,whatweneedismorethanwhatmentionedabove,butanewwaythat……..
2.社会风尚
支持
理由:
惠及自身与他人
惠及当下与未来
参与
Askedaboutmyattitudeto…,Iamtosay…iseitherbeneficialtoindividualsorelevatingtosociety.Actually,thisescalatingeffectwillnotlastformerelyseveralyears.Asasocialwealth,thisvirtueof…maybedeliveredfromoneindividualtoanother,fromonedecadetoanother,andfromgenerationtoanother.Asacollegeman,Iamdeterminedtobearole-modelin…...(Ascollegemen,wehavethedutytojoininthecampaignof……)
Ididnotdoitforyou.
IdidnotmarryyoubecauseIloveyou.
IdidnotcatchtheflightbecauseIgotupearly.
ImissedtheflightbecauseIgotuplate.
Escalate
Elevate
elevator
《狗镇》舞台剧
3.个人问题
求助:
expert,senior,friend,book,well-writtenworks
自助:
具体问题具体分析
Howcanwestepoutoftheshadowof…?
Onceuponatime,facingthesamesituation,Iwassuggestedbyfriendstoseekhelpformseniors,experts,orbooks.Thatwasaway,buthelpfromotherisnotnecessarilyavailableallthetime.Evenifitis,itisnotalwayssuitabletome.ThereforeIamdeterminedto…,to…,to…,andto….
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Exercise1
Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould
1)describethedrawingbriefly,
2)interpretthephenomenonitreflects,andthen
3)giveyourcomments.
YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)
学生的对联
图片基调ironic
相关细节
Couplet
Thefirstline…
Thesecondline…
Thehorizontalscroll…
dishonest
Emergingfromthecartoonisanironicscenethatthecoupletpastedbystudentsmirrorstheirundesirableattitudetowardcollegeexaminations.Thefirstlinereads,“therewillbenoupgradewithoutcheatinginexams”,whilethesecondlinebears,“intheirminds,successinexamsoutweighsdignity.”Thehorizontalscrollsummarizestheiridea:
they,regardlessofthevirtueofhonesty,aredeterminedtopasstestsbyanymeans.
大众观点诚信
提出质疑反问
详实论据考试作弊:
偷看,小抄,手势,手机,耳语…
得出结论
不再诚信,个人,教育,社会
Itisgenerallyacceptedthat…
Itisconventionallyholdthat…
Itissharedbythegeneralpublicthat…
Itisdeeplyrootedinthemindofthepublicthat…..
Itiswidelysharedthatnoothergroupintheworldcanbeashonestascollegestudents.Butisthatatruthanymore?
Examplesagainstthispublicviewareabundantandwithineasyreach.Fromthepointofcollageexaminationsalone,itisnotsurprisingtoseecandidatesdeliveringkeysbygesture,bywhispering,orevenbymobilephone.Evidently,amountingnumberofstudentsnolongercherishthevirtueofhonesty.Thisdelinquencyexertsnegativeinfluenceeitherontheiroveralldevelopmentoronthequalityofeducation,nottomentiontheimpactonsocialatmosphere.
PreferAtoB
AispreferabletoB.
Intheirminds,AoutweighsB.
Exercise2
2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen
ThedreamofaBird
图片基调alarming
Abirdisholdingagun.
Heisstaringatthesky.
Heishidinginthebush.
Humanbeingsaresoaringinthesky.
Hewantstorevengeonhuman.
Whatpeopleoncedidwithhim.
Depictedbythecartoonisanalarmingscenariothatabird,holdingagunandhidinginthebush,isstaringattheskywherehumanbeingsaresoaring.Obviously,helongsforadaywhenbecomesahunter,shootingpeopleforfun.Evidently,hisdreamderivesfrom/rootsin/isprovokedby/isevokedby/istriggeredby/issparkedbywhatpeopleoncedidwithhim.
【版本一】
Ithasbecomea“commonsense”thatnootherageplaceemphasisonenvironmentalprotectionsomuchastoday.Butdoeseveryofustakepartinthiscampaign?
Theanswerisratherdisappointing.Thefollowingmisdeedsordelinquencyarefamiliar.Itisnotsurprisingtoseesomeofushuntingwildlifeforfun,cookingthemforfood,orsellingthemforprofit.Meanwhile,itisnotuncommontofindsomefactoriesemmitingtoxicgaswithatmospherepolluted.Evidently,thesenseofachievingabetterenvironmentisnotsopervasiveasweexpect,whichmaybedetrimentaltoourwell-beingorlong-termdevelopment.
【版本二】
Asanesteemedthinkeronceput,“….”
Nevereasilyletgoofthetruth,“….”
Nevershrugoffthemotto,“….”
Nevereasilywaveasidethemotto,“”
Theintendedmeaningofthecartooncanbesummarizedasamotto,“…”
Thecartoonistusestheuniquematphortoendowusthat…..
Thatis,….
Simplystateit,….
Inotherword,…..
Putitanotherway,….
Thenaturemaytreatusthewaywetreatit.
Whatwedowiththenatureistobeansweredfor.
【版本三】
itisourobligationtobeongoodtermwithournature.However,suchadoctrinehasbeenwavedasidebymostofus.Anycases?
Haven’tyoueverfoundsomeofushuntingwildlifewithspeciesendangered?
Haven’tyouevernoticedsomefactoriesover-miningwithgeographicdisastersrecurring?
Wherehastheirconsciencegone?
Wherehastheirsenseofsocialresponsibility?
Wherehastheirinsightofthefuturegone?
tthesevirtuesswallowedbygreediness,sacrificinglong-termbenefitsforinstantsatisfactionofeconomy?
Sacrifice…for….
Exhibitedbythiscartoonisamotto:
thenaturemaytreatusthewaywetreatit.Toputitanotherway,itmayrewardusfruitfullyonconditionthatweareongoodtermwithit,whilepunishusifwemistreatit.Inthepast,naturalresourceswereavailableanytimeandanywhereinthatpeopleneverwenttoofarinexploitingthem.Currently,thingshaschanged–ourgreedinesshasdeprivedusoftherightstoenjoythoseonceabundantresources.Thebirdinthepicture,byhisrevenge,intendtowarnusthathumansmaypayaheavypriceforwhattheydidwiththenature.
Deprivesb.of….
Beongoodtermwithit
Getonwellwithit.
Exercise3
Haveyoueverbeencaughtinadilemmaoradelicatesituation?
Ifso,youmayfeelthesamesorrowandpuzzleasthemandoesinthepicture.
Theman,facingseveraldirections,iswalkingbackandforth,wonderingwheretogo.Thecaptionisremindinghim,aswellasallofus,thatwhattroublesusisnotadversitiesthemselvesbutourindecisiveness.
Remindsb.sth.
Remindsb.that…
Exercise4
图片基调sarcastic
overall/excessive
sitting
explaining
excusinghimselffor…
Behonesttocustomers
Undertheridiculousappearanceofthecartoonliesasocialevilwhichmayexertheavypressureoneachconsumer.Inthedrawing,sittinginfrontofapatient,asurgeonisexplaining“outoftheconsiderationofyourhealth,Irenderyouanoverallmedicaltreatment.”Actually,heisexcusinghimselfforhisexcessiveremedy.Suchexcuseisnotrareinalmostanybusiness!
Toliveistolearn.
Asanesteemedscholaronceput,“Totakegoodcareofcustomersistocarehimselfforanybusinessorsocialagencies.”Inotherword,itisimpossibleforanyfirmtoflourishifitpaysnoattentiontotheinterestsofconsumers.However,asignificantnumberofagencies,likethedoctorinthepicture,letgoofthetruth.Letustakebanktransactionforexample.Inseveralbanks,agedpeoplearealwayspersuadedintopurchasingsomesubstandardmoneymanagementservices,resultingtofinancialloss.Evidently,suchbusinesses,iftheycontinuethesemisconducts,maybeabandonedbythegeneralpublic.
Persuadesb.intodoing….
Dissuadesb.fromdoing….
Imposeheavypressureon…
Exert…..on….
Exercise5
Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingd
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